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  1. justin12107
    She's been saying she would continue this story for a LONG time, but has yet to really do so. Please don't take offense to this but stop lying to us! This is an amazing story, honestly one of the best I have ever read online. I think alot of people will agree with me when I say quit toying with us by telling us your gonna focus on this story when you end up starting 2 others! I refuse to read the other two until i get atleast 3 chapter updates on AYC.
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    Quick question i read LiS and i didn't think that the end was a cliffhanger at all, but alot of people im seeing think differently. Why do you guys feel that it ended in a cliffhanger? Now if he were end shot of bourbon here then that would be one hell of a cliffhanger
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    Yuck Steelers. Just kidding my uncles a big Steelers fan so im sure hes happy. Personally im a Packers fan . They won too, tho it was a nail biter down to the last 2 minutes. So i was all smiles yesterday too. Anyway have a great week and good luck next sunday!
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    I really hope thats not the end! There is still unanswered questions like will Will come out, what did Brett have in the bag, and Will and Brett are still a question mark will they end up together or not. This cant be the end. Can it? Well if it is at least now you can start Are You Christian back up LOL I'm looking forward to chapter 10. Keep up the great work!
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    That blows man. I don't know what grade your in but one of my best friends decided he was gonna drop out like a month before we graduated. SOOO dumb. Some people think they don't need a high school diploma, but when they get out in the real world and they may wake up one day and say "damn i wish i could go to college." Don't push to hard on him cuz he might become angry with you (my friend did when a group of us tried an intervention), but try tho. If hes really stuck on dropping out I'd say try to respect his decision no matter how hard it is for you to do. I wish you Good Luck with it! -Justin
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    I read this story last night (all 30 chapters lol) it had me up till about 7am. I couldn't stop reading cuz i wanted to know if Andy would end up with Jase, but sadly I'm guessing he didn't.
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    Your a great writer probably my favorite one thats not like a professional and what not. I also admire you to for having the courage the post your stories on a website where you never kno how people will take it. Something i wish i had the balls to do with my stuff. Keep up the good work and don't let anyone effect your state of mind. Its not worth letting stuff get to you just because someone says something that hurts not matter who says it.
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    I like your ideas for titles: Kyle K- Fighting For Whats Mine Andrew- Worth The Wait Phillip- Building Bridges Now all we need to know is who's going to be the main character *cough* Phillip *cough* haha. anyway cant wait for the story!
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    Well lol we're different then i find Kyle more intriguing. Like you said about him not entering the story till towards the end. Makes him more mysterious because theres never really been a conversation with him either. I do agree with you tho either way this story is going to be great no matter who narrates it. And i just wanted to say im not tryin to pick a fight with you. i dont kno if you might be thinkin i am im just debating. My mom did always say i should be a lawyer...
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    thanks for proving my point. its only more interesting because we know his character more and are more used to it. With kyle tho there was never a chance to really know more he was never in the chapters that much and when he was he was just burnt like the rest of them . plus doing another story that would basically be about jarred and phillips relationship would be alot like a rerun of my jump off but with a different main character.
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    If your not gonna do andrew again id say kyle k, because we dont know that much about him. with phillip hes been a major role in both my jump off and staking my claim. Kyle K just started to become a major character towards the end of this story, leaving alot about him to be unexplained.
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    Do you mean trilogy? lol. I do admit I like the word "threequel" though About the story though the ending was bittersweet. Sweet because it seemed that he finally realized all the wrongs he has done and felt genuinely sorry for what he did, and through that it seems that he has fallen for Kyle. Bitter because I don't want it to end I would like to see how Andrew and Kyle's relationship progresses, and also to see how Andrew, Jarred, and Phillips friendship worked out. Yes you did do some of that at the end of the chapter, but i think you could have extended it a bit. It seemed as if you through it in to end it, but still it was a great story and i think a Threequel is a great idea!! lol
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    Finally the whore got caught !! Although I do feel sorry for kyle tho...
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    Ok so in the beginning I loved this story, but now not so much. Don't get me wrong your a really great writer its just that little slut of a character Andrew . Andrew needs to be with Kyle, i think hes the only one that wouldn't hurt him. Plus the end of this chapter really Pissed me off how you ended with the whole " and i wanted to talk to him".now whats gonna happen his he gonna start f**king around with this Jeremy kid! Lol but yea your a great writer and even though the story is starting to bug me I still check back almost daily for a new chapter. Andrew ♥ Kyle <--- thats how it should end
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