MozLover21
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Hey Carlos, I just realized I never replied to your comment. The story is written out, last chapter will be out this Sunday. Happy reading!
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All good things must come to an end. But don't worry, I've got a brand new story ready to go just as soon as I wrap up "Electricity"!
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Thanks for the great feedback!
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Not at all. With 2 more chapters to go, you just might get your wish! Or maybe not. I'm not telling 😅
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Thank you 🙏
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Tom Officially, Tom and Kat were no longer on speaking terms. At least not as far as Aubrey was concerned. Unofficially, Tom and Kat had concocted a plan to destroy Andrew Thompson’s career. Originally, the idea was Kat’s and Tom simply went along with it because he agreed that Andrew Thompson was a stain on the LGBT community. But after seeing just how destructive the quarterback's personality really was to anyone or any relationship within a ten mile radius to him, Tom decided he wou
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Thank you for the helpful corrections. I need to hire you as my editor 😄
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Thank you Will, I appreciate you reading the story! Next chapter is up tomorrow.
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He attempted suicide, but his sister Kat saved him.
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It will all be revealed in the next chapter 📖
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Only until Thursday morning!
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Next one is up on Thursday, 8:00am ⏱️
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Kat When her baby brother was born, Kat experienced her first real surge of jealousy. A feeling so strong and sudden it almost knocked her off her little feet right then and there. A brand new baby meant a source of competition for the attention of her parents. She didn’t want competition, she wanted to be the center of attention, always. Even before he was born, in her little four-year-old head, she dreamt up ways of how she could quietly get rid of him. Maybe if she fed him a piece o
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Thank you, it's been quite a feat trying to wrap this up, work on another story, other personal writing, and go to my regular job 😰 But I have fun doing it and your guys' comments and lovely emails make it well worth it. Let me know what you think of tomorrow's chapter.
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Next one is up on Tuesday, at 8:00AM. Set your alarm!
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From the feedback I've gotten it seems like everyone is feeling pretty heavy about this chapter. With only 4 chapters left to go, I am curious to see the final reaction.
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Thanks for the wonderful feedback as always. And this paragraph was great, made me chuckle. You're a great writer!
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Thanks for reading and for the feedback, only 4 more chapters left!
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Aubrey “Cindy’s on the phone for you Aubs,” Tom’s voice came from behind the bathroom door. Aubrey had been spending an inordinate about of time in the shower lately. Just letting the hot water wash away all the dirty mess he felt he was currently involved in. Sometimes he turned it so hot that it felt like he was going to pass out. And then he enjoyed that feeling too, because it let him focus on something other than the voice that scratched at the back of his brain, making him miss
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Alfie - he’s briefly mentioned in Chapter 6.
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Thank you, I appreciate the positive feedback. And I won't keep you waiting long, next chapter will be out very soon.
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It's not a chapter of my story if it doesn't have a brilliant dissertation from you underneath it 🙏 As always, thank you for all the astute observations. You always give me much to think about.
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Aubrey/Andrew “This is the best day of my life!” Nelson yelled out in Aubrey’s general vicinity, but without taking his eyes off the field, seemingly mesmerized by all the violent action happening below. Andrew had come through with his promise of bringing Aubrey and Nelson to one of his home games, and even though it was great to see the young boy smile, Aubrey was unnerved. “Come on Andrew! Let’s go!” Nelson yelled, and Aubrey smiled and shoved another nacho in his mouth. Althoug
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Damn...once again I’m so impressed. It’s been a rough day and your wonderful and thorough analysis has put a smile on my face. So thank you for that 🙏🏻 Your input is highly appreciated and much enjoyed. Looking forward to your thoughts on the next chapter.
