MozLover21
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Thanks so much! I appreciate the feedback 🙏
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Thanks for reading, it's much appreciated.
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When I looked at the comments last night and didn't see you at the top I definitely thought to myself, "Wesley must be asleep."
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Ahaha, thanks for another great comment! 🤣 I'm glad you enjoyed and I very much appreciate your enthusiasm for the story.
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Andrew Andrew gently unspooled himself from the still warm, and slightly sticky, tan naked body underneath him. He didn’t want to move as he was worried the other man would have another post-coital freak out, but his arm had fallen asleep at an uncomfortable angle, so he decided that he would just have to face whatever mercurial mood Aubrey was going to throw at him. Frankly, he was getting whiplash from the writer’s hot and cold disposition. But as he repositioned his body to the side
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No I really appreciate the feedback, thank you. I didn’t even realize I was doing it.
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Ha! That is not the first time I’ve heard that. I’ve been accused of using the least amount of words to convey something. Feel free to give me examples so I can work on it!
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Ahhh, I'm glad that was noted. Aubrey isn't as perfect as he'd like to think.
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Thank you for another well thought out analysis! I'm beyond impressed. You make some great points, as usual. 👏
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That's totally something Andrew would do unfortunately 😂
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Aubrey Aubrey woke up with the world’s biggest hangover to the sound of Prince snoozing away right next to his head. He remembered getting back to the room, turning his phone off, taking Prince for a walk, grabbing Taco Bell on the way back, then passing out on the creaky bed in the late night hours. The only perk of the pathetic motel room was the fact that Tom wasn’t here to tell Prince that he couldn’t sleep in bed with them. The dog’s strong scent felt unusually comforting at thi
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Thank you for reading!
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That analysis has my head spinning! If I'm ever unavailable I'm hiring you on as my ghostwriter, seems like you know these characters better than me. 🙏
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We've also learned you read faster than lightning!
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Chapter 9. Aubrey/Andrew With the stressful dinner finally behind him, Aubrey sat inside of Andrew’s Phantom Bushukan Edition and admired the wavy interior of the car and its famous starlight ceiling. He got so lost in checking out the details that he didn’t realize Andrew hadn’t moved until he heard him speak. “Listen, I’m sorry I threw you into that situation. And I’m sorry I butted in with Nelson. I didn’t mean to complicate anything for you,” he stated. Aubrey looked away f
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I do, I have a lot more in store! Appreciate the feedback 🙏
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Appreciate the great feedback, thanks!
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You guys are cracking me up 🤣
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Wow, you get a lot of points for reading so fast!
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Chapter 8. Andrew/Tom Andrew had a lot of plans for his dinner night with Aubrey, but an argument about religion was certainly not on his list. That’s why he found himself feeling befuddled as they entered the sushi restaurant silently, the atmosphere between them so tense you could cut it with a knife like a birthday cake. Or a post-funeral reception cake… When Andrew had chatted with Nelson, suggesting that he read the story of Job seemed like an innocent enough idea. Andrew was
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Electricity Chapter 7. He sat at the kitchen table typing away as quietly as possible, the phantom glow of the laptop monitor the only thing illuminating his face. It was six in the morning, and he had already been awake for an hour, diligently making progress on his Thompson Foundation article. The secret project could only be worked on in the early hours of the morning, before he would head to work and before Tom was awake. Aubrey thought about the fact that he would need to figure out
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She dug through her purse with a sense of building urgency. She could feel the Lyft driver throwing glances at her in the rearview mirror. She wasn’t sure if it was because he was worried that she was crazy or because he found her attractive. She didn’t care either way. She had a way with men, so he wouldn’t pose a problem either way. She turned her purse inside out and spilled out the contents onto his back seat. “Everything okay?” he asked. “Peachy,” she answered, moving aside her
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