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I look forward to reading more Chapters, only on Chapter 20 now, so I will be reading more as time allows, it is so good it is like not being able to set the book down, and walk away for a day or two but I must. T.

Your writing is attention grabbing, mesmerizing and totally appropriate. Please quit apologizing for anything, you are a gifted, and brilliant author, just know this I tip my hat to you.

The harsh reality of life, whether good bad or ugly is what makes us human, you worded this very difficult and emotional Chapter very eloquently keeping me riveted to my seat, and with that said: job well done.

Well, you did it again, I was hard through the whole chapter, man you make real, exciting and amazing. Thank you, Trav

I am truly at a loss for words, this Chapter was amazing. There you go again, pulling me deeper into this story. Thank you, Trav

I am really enjoying this and flying through the chapters, captivating writing......

Just finished Chapter 3 and now you have really pulled me in, and will reserve comments after reading the next 2 Chapters. Travis

So far just finished Chapter 2 and you have my attention, your writing skills pull me in. Thank you, Travis

I totally agree, I love your writing style, attention to detail, and as well how you bring these people to life. I am an image person, and my mind has already created an image of Jarren, Danny and everything surrounding them, I am looking forward to reading more of your writing, it is awesome. Travis