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  1. Cryptic

    Eclipsed

    Two friends reunited after 8 years. (They are 15 not like 30)
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    Chapter 1

    He was moving for the first time or he thought this was a very elaborate prank his parents are doing to him. He didn’t care that his family was moving and leaving everything he knew behind, except the only thing he knew was the stuff past his childhood really. He actually felt really out of place from his old place. So he didn’t feel emotionally attached to his friends or his old house. He had what he needed. His family. He was actually really bored from where he lived. Not to say he wa
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    Lovey-duvy-doodie

    WoW your man doesn't like South Park?! Is he like not straight or something? (wanted to change the subject 9/11 sucks, as in, sucks it happened, also sucks as in people remember the deaths as an event but not as a single death which to me degrades the person death. It hypes up the person death which isnt cool. Think about it?!?! How can you top dying in 9/11???? I'll um... continue this with people if they like.(big parenthesis))
  4. Ok the way I see it is that Oliver was already asleep in bed and David is sneaking back into the house because Mrs. Martin already knew that Oliver was in bed and wasnt expect David to come back after he ran out and if Oliver was alread in bed why would David be sneaking BACK in if Oliver was already in the room if they were the same there would be a reason to sneak back in if he was there already.
  5. Ok this is gonna sound really weird but my thought on this is that David is the one with the problems. And the problem may not even be MPD as all of you put it. If i'm right it looks like he has schizophrenia more then anything. I say this because, lets face it, Oliver has a mild mental lapse. He doesnt under stand what is going on most of the time and because of that in school people blamed him for acting crazy in class and acusing him that he just blacked out and never remembered it. Which could have been easily pulled off since OLIVER AND DAVID ARE TWINS. And most of the time mental problems are genetics so I figured that David got it from his father since it seems that their father is living a double life. Also in this paragraph either Dom made a mistake or it clearly shows that David and Oliver are 2 different people: Holding her hand over her fast-swelling black eye, she moved cautiously back to her bedroom to think for a moment. Damn Brian! She had been completely unprepared to be awakened in the middle of the night as David snuck back through his bedroom window. She'd been afraid that oliver had had a bad dream and went to check on him, but ended up with a confrontadtion to deal with instead and she
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