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imperfect _pisces

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  1. Thank you all for your feedback. You have officially been introduced to our two main characters, Tristan and Finn. Going forward we get to watch as their lives intertwine.
  2. The sky looked like rainbow sherbet as Finn Montgomery stepped outside. Both of his parents were standing next to a Jeep parked in the driveway. As he hugged them both, his mom gushed about how they’d wanted to wait until his actual birthday to give him his present. While his dad went on and on about heated mirrors and horsepower, Finn examined the bright-yellow paint and the dark leather interior. Stepping around to the front of the vehicle, he noticed the Duke University license plate fra
  3. Etotsira: Thank you so much for reading. I had a Sony Walkman growing up and I wish tape cassettes were still in fashion. I loved making mixed tapes. It's a lost artform. Thank you for your comment! BRENN
  4. Thank you so much for taking the time to read to comment. I promise more is to come. Thank you so much, mikedup.
  5. Dathi: Thank you so much for taking time to comment on my story. I am looking to post "Chapter 2" soon. I hope you continue to read. Thank you for your kind words. BRENN
  6. Tristan Goolsby was probably the only person in the county, maybe even the Tri-state area who owned a functioning Sony Walkman. It had originally belonged to his brother but when Everett had gone off to college several years ago, he’d bequeathed his most prized possession to his little brother. Everett now lived in Portland and DJ-ed on the weekends, mostly at bar mitzvahs and sweet sixteen parties. Once a month, he would send Tristan a cassette tape filled with music from various local bands an
  7. Tucked away in the southeast corner of Tennessee is a small town called Minor Springs. Tristan is a bullied teen who spends his days (and nights) plotting his escape. Finn has it all - popularity, money and the perfect girlfriend - but feels the town is closing in around him. As Minor Springs threatens to destroy them both, they will find refuge in an abandoned clubhouse in the woods separating their two worlds.
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