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  1. chips

    Chapter 16

    Well your story is great the last couple chapters have been very good and sad very sad to think that Dion will not be around and how upset Dylan will be at the loss of his love i hope that he finds some one else i also hope that you will carry on with this story and see Justin and Taryn live a long time see what this dawn thing is all about carry on great story
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    Chapter 3

    I know that we are all thinking that it was the alder's that sent the hunter's out but do we really know it could have been the mafia as Jarrod was going to spill the beans on the humoglobs the humans but what a great story very sad to lose a friend
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    Chapter 14

    Great story very well written what with the loss and settlement of the estate Sam is a great character i think he will keep them all on the go and make them all very interesting
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    Chapter 13

    your got a great story but i think that sometimes you go to much with the fighting to close together in the chapters it becomes it bit boring apart from that your stories are well written
  5. chips

    Chapter 1

    Such an emotional story well written a real tear jerker
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    Chapter 13

    A really great story a lot of pain and sadness very emotional I do hope that you will continue with this very good story
  7. chips

    Chapter 1

    A really great story all of the chapters I'm sure all the rest will be as good wonderfully lovely and intense a work of art
  8. chips

    Chapter 17

    What a great story beautiful were billy just sits with his mom holding on to her it's your moms that all of us think of the most and when they are gone i would say that we miss them 😥
  9. I hope that Randy and Ryan will get back together as Ryan knows he dose not belong with the group that he is with and will probably end up getting hurt a lot more if he dose, I would hope that Randy would be there for him🤞
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    Chapter 12

    eagerly waiting for chapter 13 and many more hopefully 🤞🤞
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    Chapter 12

    Well all I can say is what great story it has every thing laughter sadness even I had a tear in my eyes you have got a great story with Sam and all can't wait to see what happens next and how it goes on I'm hope the story has a long way to go keep going
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    Chapter 50

    Great story
  13. When are you going to carry on with this story you have got to keep it going really great story line please
  14. chips

    Chapter 50

    Great story
  15. chips

    Chapter 11

    thanks for another great story i bet Sam will be starting to ask a few questions and looking to help out with the physiotherapy more often keep the story going waiting for the next chapter🤣
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    Chapter 10

    chips your hole story is a great story I do hope that you are going to carry on with this and more about life on the farm
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