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Well worth the wait. The story line is progressing slowly but with enough action to make it worth it. I am eager to see all of Kandric's brothers meet in the same place. That is probably a looooong way off, but I am willing to wait. This entire saga is well worth professional editing and publishing. Thank you for sharing your story with us.

Unless the scientist can figure out that his signal is still being jammed without Sean's help, I don't think they have to worry about him this time. I think the point to this ending is that no matter what you do, you will never make the world perfect with time travel. Look at all the ways David and Brian have tried. There are always unforeseeable events and the ever present "Butterfly Effect." David should have never forgotten this thought. Time travel will never be an answer to any problem, and David, Brian and company have learned this through experience. We can still have fun imagining though

This doesn't sound like Uncle Sinclair to me. If he was behind it, why would the government mages be so week not only in power but in training? Some other doubts include: 1. Why would Uncle Sinclair not have used the device that interferes with mages to his own advantage already? 2. If the government mages where where working with Uncle Sinclair, why attack the first time they did when Worthington was already under attack by daemons? 3. The government mages are too clumsy and could not go undetected by the other mages for long, and any link back to Uncle Sinclair would cause every other mage who found out to eliminate him immediately(Worthington has been defensive so far for his own interests). 4. Uncle Sinclair is both Dark and Evil, he would not care for the children at the camp or have underestimated Worthington so easily.

I just bought the first one from Amazon today. Is a second one planed for the near future? Update: I just finished the first book (In one sitting of course) . It is as good as any of Dan's other stories, but one killer of a cliffhanger . I make this plea to anyone who enjoys dkstories's online stories: Buy a copy of the book so Dan will get the next one out soon.

I read all of Dom's stories while he was still working on TOSOM. With the long waits I decided to not read ITFB until it is finished. I wonder how long I will be able to hold out.

Suspense and romance perfectly blended together. :king:

Thanks. I have been following your stories as well. I particularly enjoyed New Brother, it does us all good to remember the impact we have on those around us, especially those who help.

Hi everyone. I have been reading here at GA for almost a year now . When I started I was living in a small city and had enough social contact, as far as I was concerned. Now I live in such a small town that I actually see cows, sheep , and horses walk by my window at school and work. So, I've decided to get more involved online. Without at least having my college GSA to be myself at I figure I will just do so here. Anyway, I am a 21 year old college student and I read all the time . I found this site through a Nicholas James story posted on nifty. I immediately became addicted. Most of my exposure was on nifty :nuke: and it is sometimes exhausting trying to find good material there, so I followed the links here. It was during my winter break from school and in one month I went through everything by DK, Dom, Vlista, Littlebuddhatw, and quite a few others. I enjoyed everything . Since then I have been following over a dozen stories from here and other good sites. I plan to be much more active in the forums now and look forward to getting to know a few people.