franticity

Oh god yes! I can't wait for the 26th, when the second season airs on BBC America.

I went the youth route, in the style of Dorian Gray. Although, maybe I should have finished reading the book before deciding...

I too have been accused of being flirtacious to a girl, and this was months after I came out to her.

I totally agree. Definitely want to see more poetry from this author *nudge nudge*.

I think I know how you felt, when it was just starting off. After every meal, I look in the mirror and see my expanded stomach, and am thoroughly disgusted. I know that it's not fat, but it just gets to me that my body looks better when I don't eat. It's ok though, because I eat whenever I'm nervous, which is always. So I have a wonderful cycle of eating and self disgust going on. Anyway, about the story, Would you like to write a chapter in my life? Or have you secretly been writing my life, and that's how you know how I feel. In all seriousness, though, when I read this, it just hit home. I don't know if you've ever actually felt it before, but it's utterly horrible. Other than that, excellent development, and I certainly didn't expect the story to go that way!

I've only just made it up to this point, so I'm not going to pretend to know what's going to happen, or how their looks will affect the story. I would like to point out, however, that I actually prefer not to know what each character looks like. I mean, sure, vague details are always nice, but I hate those cliche "looking in the mirror" scenes. I much prefer to create the character in my mind, by my own description of their extreme hotness. I am enjoying the story, though.

I can't exactly speak from experience, since I haven't read your works, but typically, people read something, and then their first reaction is "hey, that was pretty good." And that's it. And they move on to the next story, not even bothering to comment or review it. That doesn't mean that you're a bad writer, that just means that people in general are ignorant of the need for response that writers typically have. Some people just don't understand that feedback in any form is a good thing.

I read your stuff more on GA because it is more convenient and because I am on here more often. And it looks nicer. Justin

Wow. I went in not expecting to like it, but what can I say, it was pretty good. Especially with the video. My song choice is a little more depressing, by Armor for Sleep. I have part of the lyrics in my signature. They seem to mesh with my life right now. It'll probably change in about a month or so, but for now, there it is.

Yup. and you'll never guess what. The person below me rides a bicycle at least once a week.

Sorry, but you're wrong. But I'm not telling what I am doing tonight. Person below me went to a diner in the past week.

Very nicely done. I look forward to seeing more. and by the way, you're not insane. You should get that face checked out though. Creepy. And thank you Conner. It was the least I could do for such a great story.

psh, you can't fall in love that fast, this is only my eleventh post. Anyway, you be surprised how hard it is to find a picture of a strobe light, but I'm hoping this will do. Again, pm me if you like/dislike it, or want anything changed. I love an opportunity to practice this.

I start anything I write on post it notes. If I like it when I'm done, I'll put it on my wall and leave it for the next day. I f I don't, then I crumple it up and throw it out(my trash is mostly yellow). This system has worked for me so far, the only problems are that if you make a mistake, you might not have room to correct it, and if your beginning is long, it could take up quite a few post its. My two cents, Justin

Mkay (sorry, I couldn't resist). Sort of a something like this? And anyway, you shouldn't need to give out a reward, because if you get a "pretty", then more people read your story, and if more people read your story, then you're more likely to keep writing. And that should be reward enough. If you want anything changed, just pm me.

Well, there are some characters that you're allowed to kill off, but I agree, there are certain characters where killing them off kills the story.

Well, if we'll like it, then chances are no one dies. Hooray! Unless... No, I won't say it, for fear that I will be right on and it will detract from the story. Suffice it to say that I have a very elaborate theory. But if you do see me jumping up and down shouting "I was right!", don't be too surprised. Chances are I won't be right, though.

I agree with you, but I'm just not sure how one of the schools students being sent to the hospital is grounds for shutting down an entire school. I think you might be on the right track though.

See? What did I tell you. Your stories just don't suck. Well, ok, so you've found the one style of writing that no one can make interesting. You turn the screw slowly, watching as it revolves, slowly removing itself from it's plastic prison. And in other news, another great story. And you're right, the cliffhanger wasn't too bad, though I'll probably still be checking back every day or two to see when the next one comes out. Damn, I think I'm getting addicted.

No one will want to strangle you with your intestines, for one simple reason: your stories don't suck. Ever. And no, I'm not shamelessly sucking up to you, every story of yours that I have read (including Ana, which I didn't think I was going to like, and still have mixed feelings about) just doesn't suck. You have an interesting writing style that (IMO) can make anything interesting.

I know exactly what you're talking about. I have been working on a story for a couple weeks, but can only work on it when I am in the mood and I have a good hour and a half or more to devote to it. By the way, I absolutely love Rave Boy, and I can definitely relate to Joey in terms of personality. I can't say that I can relate so much in terms of drug use, and I'm single, so... we'll keep the comparison to personality. But anyway, thank you for continuing to write the story, and I hope to see more soon.