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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
manhandle commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
I must've been drunk because I read this chapter but not the 3 before it? I am confused by my own actions. -
Part One. Chapter Eleven.
manhandle commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
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This was HOTTTT. It’s Midnight and I have to work at 5am. I gotta call it a night and it’s the worst decision I’ve made in a while.
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Part One. Chapter Eight.
manhandle commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eight.
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I didn’t realize one’s so far behind. Looks like I’ll be binging. this was a great chapter. Kyans plan will backfire I’m sure of it.
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
manhandle commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
He loved their first hook up because there was an emotional connection, and this time there wasn't and he HATED IT. You can't expect a casual relationship and then be disappointed when you get a casual relationship. Kyan 100% wants more with Perry and I think this will be the catalyst.- 122 comments
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
manhandle commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
The only person who will admit the truth lol- 122 comments
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
manhandle commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
Kyan will be a nervous wreck and Max will calm him down and walk him through it all. Max knows what's coming. He's no dummy. -
Part One. Chapter Eleven.
manhandle commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
How many people read this chapter and then immediately washed their sheets?- 122 comments
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
manhandle commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
Comments are spot on. One thing that stuck out to me is that Henry was having a bad day after Perry didn't come around. I wonder if they are connected? It also makes me wonder how Perry and Kyan will handle the inevitable fall out that MrsG has waiting around the corner. They've both worried about what they could lose if things go south between them. The impact on the kids is obvious, which means they will do whatever they can to keep the drama away from them... that should be interesting.- 122 comments
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Another great chapter. I am dying from curiosity but it will have to wait. All in good time
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Part One. Chapter Three.
manhandle commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Three.
I’m a few chapters behind so I get to binge. A great but bittersweet chapter. Moving forward is highly anticipated. It feels like it might never happen and yet it does. -
Finally get caught up. Enjoying the story. Great character development.
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I'm a little late but glad I'm here. Kyan is dealing with life after Dayna pretty well considering. Thought this was cute. Flirting? Perry doesn't do babies but he's putting the effort forth when needed. I guess we will see how this unfolds. And of course the ice cream sammies were too precious. Off to read chapter 3.
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Great chapter. Great comments. Feels good to be back. See you Thursday.
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This is a well written addition to an already amazing story. MrsG did a splendid job of cramming so much goodness into a short story without it ever feeling rushed. Her pacing was on point. Even the character development--despite being a continuation to an already developed story, is well arced. She brings her biggest hits -- Boss Nanny and Jay's Loelife -- together one last time and she does it with perfectly.
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The girls being "High maintenance AF" 😂😂 Jay playing again but for a good cause 😍😍 The girls fighting over who is daddy and who is uncle Taywer 🥰🥰 The song. The support. The We Are the World vibe. 😢😭😭 Loren doubting himself and who he is 🤬🤬 Everyone around him showing how amazing he is and loved he is 💝💝 Realizing he's finally living his best life ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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Since I feel it's only appropriate to use Jurassic Park memes in resonse to this chapter. Loren despite his parents: Loren when he finds a stranger on his porch: The girls getting revenge on Jay's behalf (last chapter) What should happen to all the people involved in child trafficking Rob Stone regarding Loren's past.
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I loved Aidan in Boss Nanny and then again in Jay's Loelife. Then we met Carson and I loved him too. Now we have the girls with their little pigtails and I just can't with the cuteness. There is not much I can say that hasn't been said by all the other comments but you play the ominous card very well. I feel Loren's pain as he waits for Rob to wrap things up. I think Jay knew exactly what he was doing when he took Cousin camp on the road. It was the perfect way to take a break from the emotional stress of waiting.
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Oh god...Not Jay! In all seriousness, this broke my heart. It is obviously very emotional for him and his family. I wonder if it's going to end his career.
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Most points have been touched. There was one thing that was breezed passed that alerted my senses. So Jay wants Josh to do the exclusive?????? There has to be 1000 other journalists that are more than capable, ones that don't send Loren into a fit. I don't know why but I don't like this. I thought Jay already investigated this? What more is there? Why Josh? Why do I feel like we're being set up here? I am very nervous.
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You just listed all her stories lol. I'm with you in that my favorite story is always the current one. I get very invested and attached in the moment. Much like relationships when I was younger.
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Loved it. Loved Jensen to bits and Nolan was an unexpected delight. There is such a natural and real progression to the story that brings it to life. It has everything; first lust, excitement, giddiness, disappointment, regret, courage, forgiveness, humor, etc. Nothing is missing.
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Loved it. Drew me in and kept me reading to the very last sentence. Such a realistic tale from beginning to end. Loved the characters and how they grew naturally over time until they were ready to finally come together. I can't say it's my FAVORITE story of yours but it's right up there. It will be a staple no doubt.
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