Why does it say they lost four times? Because the chapter was totally flawless and I thought to myself, “Geemeedee will have nothing to do. I need to give him inconsistency to keep his mind sharp.”
In all honesty, I changed a few things. I thought I got them all, but clearly I didn’t lol. Now I get to go back and fix all my story holes.
I appreciate your praise. I have no qualms about my skill. I’m far from a qualified writer. If you want to PM me, I’d love to hear more detailed thoughts on how I could tweak.