I read this when it was posted on gayauthors however many years ago and I find myself coming back to read it time and again. The subtlety is superb. Like others have mentioned the imagery is just enough that I envision your world with my spin on it. The settings aren't these null voids of white space; instead I can see it vividly. I enjoy your writing style immensely and look forward to seeing more of your work.
I have a question regarding Taylor's Past in regards to character history from "The Ordinary Us". Below is an expert from Chapter 1 of "Hello Stupid." Taylor mentions the statement below in bold.
My question is below, just to be safe it's blacked out in case someone hasn't read TOU and any effect it may have on someone's reading.