Concurring with the other comments of being bland and formulaic, the lack of a personal point of view to drive the story for the reader leaves me with little incentive to continue the story. I compare this to a recent incident regarding a music composition. The “composer” sent me an audio file of an arrangement of a song without giving me additional information of the source, asking my help in generating a printed score for performance. The audio file was obviously way beyond the capability of the sender both in style and orchestration. When pressed for more information, he admitted it was AI generated from his prompts. He was quite excited about the AI program he used. Of course I refused to get involved stating he could not claim this as his own composition.
It is an interesting experiment KKirk.
