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My mostly sleepless night was beginning to catch up with me. The only thing I wanted to do was go home and curl up in bed with a good book. Unfortunately, I knew I needed to return to the office and write up my notes. By the time I got there, Novak had already left for the day, so I had the place to myself. Ignoring the blinking message light on the desk phone, I sat down at my desk and started recording my conversation with Ricky. I was just about to leave when my cell phone buzzed. It was
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Kyle hated when the paparazzi showed up at the nudist hiking retreat.
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I would never besmirch the name of our gay goddess (and as far as I'm concerned, the one and only) Kylie....
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Looks like things are getting...hairy...in the comments section.
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I parked my car in front of the antique store and looked over at Jacy. "Are you ready?" "As I'll ever be. What about you? Is the camera running yet?" I clicked on the camera pen I'd inserted into the neck of my polo shirt. "It is now. I feel like James Bond." Jacy laughed. "That thing is so cool. This detective stuff is a lot more fun than I thought." "It has its moments," I said with a grin. "We've got our story straight, right?" "Yep. I'm starting a collection, and I w
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Fun fact: I used to co-manage a burlesque company. We did scripted shows (think ridiculous time-traveling farces) and variety shows. I mostly hosted, but occasionally performed. My stage name was Jules V. Morehead, and my catchphrase was "What's better than head? Morehead!"
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I sat frozen in fear, my heart pounding in my chest. I didn't even dare to breathe, not wanting to do anything to draw the person's attention. I watched him move cautiously into the clearing. Something about the way he moved suddenly seemed familiar. "Pssst, Killian? Are you still here?" Recognition hit me all at once, followed by a flood of relief. It was Jacy. But what was he doing at the excavation? A sudden, horrible thought occurred to me. What if the police were ri
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The commenting system here is occasionally...challenging.
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I arrived at Professor Howard's at ten sharp the following morning. She lived in a relatively new development just outside of town, one of those planned communities with a pretentious-sounding name and huge homes set on generous lots. This one was ironically named Blue Heron Heights, despite the fact that there were no herons — or even a body of water — in sight. The lack of mature trees made the yards look oddly flat and empty despite the oversize houses. The professor's home, an attractiv
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They take care of themselves...but they do spawn when you're not watching...
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When I pulled into the driveway of the beach house, I was shocked to see Mom's car parked behind Kane's truck. I was out the door and halfway to the house before the engine even stopped. I charged into the kitchen, where I caught Mom in a bear hug. "I didn't know you were going to be here!" Ever since she'd moved to Pennsylvania to live with my Aunt Kathy, Mom's visits had grown further and further apart. She gave me a wry grin. "That's because it was supposed to be a surprise, yo
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Only time will tell!
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I was actually. I thought it was terribly clever 20-some years ago. Then I fell in love with the characters and never changed it.
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Between the creepy caller and my scary realization, by the time I got to the B&B, I was thoroughly spooked. So when I got to my room and turned the light on to see someone sitting on my bed, I couldn't hold back the scream. I quickly shut the door, hoping I hadn't woken any of the guests. "Seth," I hissed. "What are you doing?" "Waiting for you." "It's been a long day and I'm exhausted. The last thing I need is you nagging me about my gifts. I started my training today. Happy
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It just shows how smart you all are! (not to mention y'all have good taste in reading materials...)
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So when are you writing YOUR mystery novel?
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Yes, the classic antagonistic relationship between the police and the private eye is a popular trope across pretty much all mediums — book, TV, movies...you name it. I've tried to play with that because logically, it makes sense, right? If the police always find you at the scene of the crime, after a while, you should probably be a suspect. I'm looking at you, Jessica Fletcher! But I also tried to subvert it a little by having Killian have a relatively collegial relationship with Kaplan, at least. There's a sort of mutual respect. Kaplan is more bluster than anything. The portmanteaus are always amusing! Kasher is really the only option for the Killian/Asher stans. And Millian is certainly preferable over the other option with Killian/Micah. But why Kasy over Jillian? 🤣 Never mind, I think I just answered my own question... And yes, Killian probably should tell them? Now, will he? Probably not.
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A scene from a horror movie greeted me as I burst into the clearing right behind Jacy. Wisps of fog swirled around the still figure of Elyse, who was bent over something lying in front of her. She was weeping, the only sound to be heard in the eerily still forest. Our sudden arrival caused the mist to shift, revealing a body sprawled on the ground. I recognized Bridget Foxwell, her brightly colored, striped tank top marred by a dark stain. The sight seemed so surreal that, for a moment, I w
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He was probably a distinctly American phenomenon. 🤣 The bubbles... But it did give us the iconic Doonese sketches from SNL
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I HATED The Lawrence Welk Show as a kid. I would imagine I still would as an adult.
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That's fair! How do you think poor Killian feels! 🤣 But as I always say, these books would be very short if they weren't vague... "Arrest Dave. He killed me." The End
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When we got back to the house, dinner was almost ready. After filling in Lily, Nikki, and Fletcher about the antique store, Jacy and I set the table while Lily and Fletcher finished the last-minute preparations. The meal was delicious, the fish surprisingly tasty with the delicate flavors of herbs and smoke. The conversation was even better. I allowed the topics of discussion to flow around me, just listening to the easy banter between family members. I suddenly realized the room had g
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Oh yes, he was well aware of them, but this was also a new song for him, and he really liked it. The first thing I did was send it to him. LOL
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First comment! Nice! I have to admit that I only knew one Boney M song and it's "Rasputin." Now I know two!
