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Chapter 15 When It's All Fireworks
Grayson Rose commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 15 When It's All Fireworks
Very good points. Did Marcus really love Sean? Very good question. Answer coming up really soon. Marcus's past with Sean is truly affecting his inability to make a choice between the two brothers. -
Chapter 15 When It's All Fireworks
Grayson Rose commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 15 When It's All Fireworks
Cameron's dislike of Andres comes from a place of hurt. He doesn't know how to articulate that very well. Ryan was definitely playing a game. His feelings have grown pretty deep for Marcus and he wants what he wants. -
Chapter 15 When It's All Fireworks
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He is in love with both of them. I think anyone would find it difficult to decide between two guys they love especially if they both treat you right and you accept them for who they are. Plus there’s something else but I don’t ruin that little bit by saying it. But the choice is coming. -
Marcus woke up in bed naked and alone. He could still feel all the places where Ryan had kissed and touched him. He slowly began to drift off into the memories of their encounter when he heard the sound of a marching band. At least, he thought it was a marching band. The sound came through his open bedroom window. It was a distant, slightly off-key rendition of “America the Beautiful,” accompanied by what sounded like drums, cheering, and several car horns. Marcus rolled onto his back
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Chapter 20 A Year in the World
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Chapter 20 A Year in the World
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Chapter 4 Edge of Tension
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Chapter 20 A Year in the World
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With these two there’s really just one thing missing. -
SPRING It wasn’t just that it was a party. It was also a nightclub. Jamie hadn’t been inside a nightclub in almost two years. He’d forgotten how fucking loud they were. Hell, he had forgotten how loud life in general could be. “WHAT?” Connor shouted. Jamie leaned closer. “I SAID THIS WAS YOUR IDEA!” “I CAN’T HEAR YOU!” “THEN WHY DID YOU ASK WHAT I SAID?” Connor grinned. He loved how easily he could get under Jamie’s skin and how natural their banter was.
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Chapter 19 Back on Dry Land
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Thank you! I agree that their love will always be there to guide them. -
Chapter 19 Back on Dry Land
Grayson Rose commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 19 Back on Dry Land
Let's see...in chap. 17, they found the airplane so they could use the parts to reflect light from the island to signal for help. In chap. 18, there was the sound of an approaching helicopter that had come to save them. Admittedly, I could have written the whole rescue scene, but I just wasn't feeling it for some reason. So, I apologize for that. Daisy was for sure rescued as well, but her family reunion would have been private, as she wasn't from the same state as the boys...so in the end her purpose had been served. I'd like to think she's off adjusting better than Jamie and Connor, as she came to the island willingly with Dale and had things that they didn't have. -
The quiet was louder than any voice could ever be. In all the years, the sheriff’s office had never been so quiet. ThereConnor and Jamie’s parents sat beneath fluorescent lights as they hummed loudly. The four of them looked like they had been through an emotional storm that lasted longer than any of them would have cared for it to last. Jamie’s mother sat with both hands wrapped around a paper cup that had gone cold nearly an hour ago. His father sat beside her, one knee bouncing unc
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Chapter 14 All the Stars Above
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I’m so glad you pointed that out. I’ve tried to balance both relationships out to where either brother would be a good fit for Marcus. The hard choice will be coming before long. -
The dive bar was live, and the dance floor was packed with bodies in motion. In the middle of the crowd, Marcus and Cameron were pressed together. Sweat dripped from their bodies. Cameron’s white crew-neck T-shirt clung to his body as if it had been painted on him. Marcus slid his hand up the stud’s arm, teasing him the way he had come to enjoy. His hand moved along Cameron’s shoulder and then up the side of his face. He took Cam’s Stetson off and placed it on his own head. Cameron b
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Civilization? That’s a very good question because life kept moving without them.
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I agree. The boar hunting is not an easy feat. Both boys have kind found their thing that fits who they are.
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Connor sat where the water surrendered to the sand. His knees were drawn up, forearms resting loosely across them as he stared toward the endless blue. A year and a half. Sometimes that number felt impossible. Other times, Connor could feel every single day of it. His blond hair had grown well past his shoulders now, bleached nearly white at the ends from endless days beneath the sun. A scruffy beard covered a face that had once been clean-shaven. His skin had browned. His hands had ha
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Chapter 13 Under the Wyoming Sun
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It’s definitely a tough one. -
Chapter 13 Under the Wyoming Sun
Grayson Rose commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 13 Under the Wyoming Sun
Yes he is. I’m finding it difficult. I think I’m close to a decision though. -
Chapter 13 Under the Wyoming Sun
Grayson Rose commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 13 Under the Wyoming Sun
I think they both force Marcus to live again just in very different ways. Which is a good thing, considering his loss. I'm also still very torn over which brother he ends up with. -
Marcus came to a stop in front of the house. The Calloway ranch was a massive stretch of land filled with cattle and horses. Marcus could easily picture Cameron and Ryan hanging around growing up there, running around, playing, and fighting. Those images made him smile. He didn’t have to text or wait for Ryan. The front door opened, and Ryan ran out and down the steep driveway. Marcus cut the engine off and stepped out of the truck. He leaned over the hood as he watched Ryan. The mor
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Chapter 12 The Calloway Brothers
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Chapter 12 The Calloway Brothers
Grayson Rose commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 12 The Calloway Brothers
lol thank you -
Ryan stood at the foot of his bed. The white towel was wrapped around his waist as little drops of water ran down the front and back of his body. His cell phone rested on the bed. He had the speaker on. There was the sound of Marcus’s voice, and then the beep that indicated the voicemail was ready to record. “Hey, I haven’t heard from you since you went to Boston. I just want to make sure you’re okay. Call me.” Ryan hung up the phone. “Trouble in paradise?” Cameron asked. Ryan qu
