Hi, Mark
I've been reading along throught the entire string of stories from "Academic Predator" to "Be Rad." I'm impressed with your ability to generate chapters so quickly and still maintain high-quality characterizations that even develop across story-lines.
One of the techniques that intrigues me the most is your creation of "genealogical" character sets, like Jeff and Frank and Robbie and Billy or Roger and Mouse. I like the balance you strike between essential similarites and individualizing traits. The way each member of the set evokes the others yet interacts differently with a character like JP, say, is a very skillful way to elaborate on JP's character when he's no longer the central figure in the narrative. I look forward to the chapters to come.
whenpghsfly [Joe]
