So Vic when you went to cool down who did you picture yourself as, Quinn or Jude?
As for the sex scene, Dom you made it work very well. I liked it. I'm certain readers will get "HOT" reading it. I felt it worked very well as you progressed Quinn even further along into acepting who he is. You made it very believable which is very nice to see. Well done.
As for the rest of thet story, I'm uncertain if it is was split or not. I can hope that it has been split, but considering what has happened it almost feels as if you set it up for the very last chapter. So even though Vic is happy that you didn't listen to 'crazy me' please I hope your hearing me now, I hope you did split the chapter so that there is still two more chapters.
Not that it will make much difference now.
Great job dude, you did it again!!!!