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Linxe Termoil

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  1. Oh....and you have to continue this. The idea of a pussy-assed shaman freaks me out; to the point that I want to find a book about ali baba and throw it at you Anyways, Glee is on. Laterz Tater.
  2. Linxe Termoil

    Story

    It's like...reading Twilight, but with wolves and no broken headboards. Why are there no broken headboards??? The idea of a shaman priest is pretty interesting, though the parts about the alpha's wolf and being a werewolf were confusing. I'm going to believe that when the alpha was referring to his wolf he meant his inner werewolf. Hrm. Do continue this. I get a feeling it would have been better understood if it had been a serial rather than an anthology. Linxe
  3. kissie kissie...Hello Ben I think I like Ben. Hrm... Ben's home life...I'm more interested in his life in general. Perhaps we'll find out.
  4. Thanks. I think we'll be seeing the Principal and those idiots a bit more. The principal is one of the reasons as to why the story ends the way it ends, after all.
  5. Yes ma'am.... and, you'll survive lol. You also know you really love me. I'll write more after finals. I have a week off coming up (next week) Hopefully I'll get past writer's block then.
  6. whoops, this was meant for youThank you. I have 15 written, and I'll post it when I can. 16 might be a bit delayed due to finals and stuff this week (plus I caught a cold. Can you believe that crap. Talk about bad timing to go getting sick )
  7. Thank you. I have 15 written, and I'll post it when I can. 16 might be a bit delayed due to finals and stuff this week (plus I caught a cold. Can you believe that crap. Talk about bad timing to go getting sick )
  8. Yes, they did. I think I like it. I'm not sure though. I'm still holding out opinions until everything is working properly.
  9. Hrm... A good piece, lots of narrative. That narrative is necessary in establishing a story, and you did a good job with it. Unfortunately, the ending was kind of lacking. As in, you need more...I now expect a series. Thnx, Linxe
  10. Interesting story, and an even more interesting read, full of interesting sequences. More importantly, it is thought provoking. If you could live forever, would you? For some reason I am thinking that yes, these people could live forever. More so, I'm also thinking that these people choose the time and place of their dying. (When they are ready, not because they are forced to die) If that is the case, I think my answer would be much like the protagonist and his decision in this story.
  11. Hrm. This story was interesting, to say the least. Especially when we discover the identity of the young man. Unfortunately the time flow and snap backs from dreaming to reality didn't work out as well as I suspect they could have. Overall, not too bad though.
  12. bloody jeesus christ almighty. You just...need to finish the series Damn Now I have to wait. Evil. Oh Yeah, now I have to go read all the others. well, most of them...yeah
  13. Hrm. I hate to say it, but you may have to get a divorce. There's no reason (even though it is unlikely) that you two can't remain friends. But face it, you're both the parents here, and, if you continue down this unhappy road, you both are going to end up being miserable and so is that child. If you can't do it for you, do it for the child, no matter what the decision is.
  14. Nope, it's Le Sigh. No idea why, it just is. (seems more masculine that way?) Confession time. I am stuck. Again. I have several ideas in my head, but, I need more. That's where you all come in. What kind of scenes do you guys fantasize about when it comes to the characters? (Not just sex. I have several enough of those on my own as it is). I want to make everyone grow, I want to finish this (That said, I did order a book to help me out on one part that will be played out) but I don't want to leave you all hanging after chapter 15 either, which I do need to edit and get to Sharon. I'm just...stuck... So, yeah, help a fellow out here. What do you all think about, what scenes do you see playing out? Let me know, Linxe
  15. Happy Birthday Foopy Have a good one
  16. Happy Birthday Damond!
  17. Thanks, I'm considering a spider-webs spinoff featuring Joel...But, I don't want him to be gay...everyone else is gay...it'd be weird...and I don't write bisexual very well. Are straight stories allowed here? O_o Hrm... come to think of it, I'm not sure I could write straight either... Le Sigh. I'll figure something out. Linxe
  18. Ehr. No. Micah has so much more growing to do, and there are so many more side-arcs to this story to help achieve that growing that, I'm afraid to say this story will probably go on for another 10 to 16 chapters, at least. Sorry if that disappoints you.
  19. Chapter 14 is up. Next chapter will be up next week Saturday plus or minus a day or two. Please leave me feedback, rate and review Thanks, Linxe
  20. I stared at Patrick when he made that announcement, and then pulled on the door handle. It was locked. “Unlock this door,” I demanded, going from calm to angry in a flash. “We need to get to the Windletons’. ” Patrick didn’t argue, just did as I demanded. On the ride to the Windleton’s Patrick kept telling me to calm down. I’m not sure why he was telling me to calm down, though. I was just sitting there calmly grinding my teeth.. Patrick pulled over on the side of the road and came to a s
  21. It's Sword-toting masked man of mystery vs. Ninja in this story. Who is going to win in this epic war?
  22. Linxe Termoil

    L.A.F.

    The sound of the buzzer signaled the end of the second quarter. The home crowd groaned in disappointment. I joined in with the groaning. Our team was not doing well, at all. Across the basketball court the visiting team’s band struck up the chords to Dude (Looks like a lady) just as white smoke flared up on the basketball court. I watched with dismay as some members from our team turned to watch the display. The smoke dissipated to reveal a white ninja kicking and flipping his way down the bas
  23. Sure have darling, every day that I look in the mirror. But if you're referring to a movie, I'll look into it
  24. Hi Lisa. I'm glad you are enjoying this story. I wanted to let you know that I have responded with far more depth over in my forum boards. You can find the link here. http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/24736-spider-webs/page__view__findpost__p__317070 Regards, Linxe
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