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  1. endlessfire

    Chapter 40

    They have to find Robbie's body or I'm going to be waiting for him to turn up in a future story with amnesia or something. With the twists and turns you take it's hard to believe something like this without proof. Robbie? Really? Of all the people to kill off you chose Robbie? Dang Mark.
  2. You know what, I'm going to be in denial until Robbie is found dead. I'm going to hold out hope that you aren't really that sadistic. Denial works well for me, I use it often. Senator Danfield is too bad to die but if he does, that's how I want to go out too!!!!!!
  3. Tim, you seriously need to take your meds. The point I was making is that, for him, NOT THE REST OF THE WORLD, but for someone in his situations those things would normally cripple someone emotionally. Have you ever tried being 14 with a crazy ass mother and no support at home? The thing with his brothers just means that those are two more people who have abandoned him, by his way of thinking. I get that, for whatever reason, you want to believe that the women are innocent angels but they aren't. What you fail to realize is, that when there is only one girl in a family full of boys, the girl will usually get her way, especially with the female adults. This chapter proves that the two women care more about what the girl is 'feeling' than the boy. Plus, when you live a sheltered life, things that seem small to others will hit you the hardest. Will had to care about his self, his mother hated him, both his fathers were gone, and his brothers didn't have time for him. He was left in two houses without one person to give a damn about him.
  4. I think the part most of you who want Will to 'get what's coming to him' fail to realize is that most 14 year olds in his situations would be in a pysch ward by this point. You want Will to either be a child or insanely mature at all times. Let's review his life a little 1. the older brother that he adore's grows up and doesn't have time for him 2. his mother turns batshit crazy, hates him and makes his life a living hell 3. both of his fathers have all but abandoned him for their jobs 4. he's raped on vacation 5. his younger brother turns into a bitch (with good reason that he only found out later) 6. one of his fathers then turns on him 7. he had to fight like hell to win his independence because his mother was making his life hell and no one would help him 8. now his cousin is turning against him 9. his grandmother and aunt are all but telling him he doesn't really matter to the family as long as the only female grandchild (excluding the baby) gets her way Most adults wouldn't be able to handle all of that, and to expect a teenager to do it is crazy. In regards to his thinking that it's not his job to make someone else be faithful, you have to remember Will has learned, through all of the above mention events, that each person is responsible for themselves. His actions had consequences and he was made to deal with them, to me, in his mind Kyle had to deal with his own consequences and it wasn't Will's place to make him act right.
  5. endlessfire

    Chapter 2

    I have read these first two chapters trying to figure out who you're going to kill off on September 11th. But you have shown that you can surprise us with things like that. Until the story reaches that date I will probably continue trying to figure it out. I'm also trying to decide who I could let go of in the series and it's too hard to decide. My first thought was as long as it isn't Stef and JP and then I thought but I love Brad and Robbie no matter how screwed up they are and then I decide I love Will and I want JJ to have a chance, so I gave up because I love them all.
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