DruonGrawal

Hello there, Dom! While the eating habits of your characters sure are not among the first things that come to my mind, when I am discussing your work with a friend or try to win a new reader, I agree that they are part of what defines your personal style of writing such stories. And that is quite a good thing: Humans have a history for discussing important issues of their life while sharing a meal. Just think of a large family, united around one table for dinner, sharing the events of the day. Or high school students sitting in the cafeteria making plans for both their school and private life. So far I really enjoyed what you showed us during the moments when your characters had breakfast, lunch, dinner or just a little snack in between. Personally, I really dislike it, when my heroes lack basic human needs, like eating, sleeping or going to the bathroom from time to time. You seem to have found a good ground in the middle, where those needs are visible within the context of your writing, yet they don

I would like to take a closer look. There is nothing wrong with a bit of 'Cinderella' in your story - fairy tales have their place in literature, too. And movies like 'Pretty Woman' prove that the theme is still interesting to people nowadays. I don't care much about any rating related to sexual content. I have read great stories without even the hint of anything remotely sexual and rather poor tales where every encounter was blown way out of proportion to 10000+ words of graphic sex. All that matters is that it fits the story you are going to tell and that you - as an author - are truly satisfied with the amount of verbal erotic presented in your work. If you just cut it out because you are shy about it or you feel the need to fit a certain rating, this usually tends to have a rather negative impact on your work. Would be nice to hear from you, Howie. Wind in your fur and stars in your eyes. LazyWolf

Hello there, Howie! Well, if your offer is still open I would like to learn some more about this book you are working on. It has been a while since I last read a 'gay story' in my mother tongue. Beste Gr