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  1. colliever
    another awesome chapter Mark. lol I loved the part when he told his parents "I lost my virginity" I wonder what their reaction would be if he added "with a girl"
  2. colliever
    LOL collies are known to be fiercely loyal ..then again dogs can go astray
  3. colliever
    The Wardroom is off to a marvelous start. I'm saddened that Ballvin is gone I was somehow rooting that he and Mr. Granger would end up the same way Granger did with Travers. With his injury, along with Ballvin's death and this parting with the Captain, Mr. Granger is surely not having the best of luck. Hopefully Mr. Granger recovers quickly and be on way back and find a new love..or maybe bump into an old one. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm super excited...I'm titillated Thanks Mark...fabulous writing.
  4. colliever
    LOL now that you mentioned it..I think Mark took my Forum posting cherry too...and my second..and my third...all the way to this one and no one else
  5. colliever
    awesome ending Mark!! i was surprised that robbie actually stepped in to help max...and not just so he could beat the crap out of lark. and i can't believe max's parents just stood there...they got what they deserved. i'm glad marcel and max had a happy ending. thanks again for the wonderful story, i can't wait to see what's going to happen next in the dysfunctional CAP family. but until then its onward to the wardroom
  6. colliever
    Another great chapter Mark!!! I'm glad Max is finally realizing that he has to take control of his life. Thanksgiving dinner was very heart warming. One more to go then it's the end....any clue as to who will be narrating the next story in the series? but until then..can't wait for the wardroom to start posting
  7. colliever
    and the spear with the dildos and the grass skirt!! definitely true genius!! I couldn't help but laugh while I was at Target today and they had some grass skirts on display.
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    I'm glad Max came to his senses and finally got rid of Lark..well more like threw him out. Wow and Lou...that was definitely something I didn't expect. Oh and I loved the dance floor scene!!! that was definitely hot!! Brings back memories of my Halloween club parties days hehehee; unfortunately nothing like that has ever happened to me, but I remember the time good fun times with some old friends. Another great chapter Mark, I'm kinda sad that it's almost to the end.
  9. colliever
    i'm loving how this story is going so far though it certainly has been an emotional roller coaster. hopefully marcel and max can have a happily ever after. thanks mark...can't wait till the next chapter
  10. colliever
    and looks who come knocking on the door..Lou!! i didn't expect it to be him but i expected that he was probably going to show up sometime. i can't wait to read what happens next. bruno....that name sounds familiar...can't help but think if we met him before from the previous stories... thanks mark for another great chapter.
  11. colliever
    great last two chapters..definitely a roller coaster of emotions. i gotta agree with some of the other guys Marcel does remind me a lot of Stefan back in the Land Whore...plus the fact that he's a Hayes..makes it much more interesting. hopefully max will figure things out and things will work out between him and marcel. thanks again mark for sharing your remarkable writing talent
  12. colliever
    heartbreaking chapter....goodbyes are always the hardest. i think JP as usual is just putting up his shield. poor marcel he's fallen really hard. hopefully he'll get through it and find some happiness ...can't wait for what happens next...thanks mark..awesome chapter.
  13. colliever
    a big aloha to you mark just wanted to say thank you for the great story...i loved it. i guess i kinda cheated because i waited until all the chapters were posted before i started reading. i really enjoyed all your other stories and i knew that if started reading the gunroom i'd want to to read to all the way to the end. i really can't want to read more about mr. granger's adventures in the Wardroom hopefully travers will be there too. thank you again for sharing your wonderful writing talent.
  14. colliever
    Thanks for the awesome stories. After reading Be-rad and Man In Motion I decided to read all the prior stories to get further insight into the characters...I couldn't believe I spent a whole weekend just reading The stories just captured my attention and at times I forgot about sleep. After reading the earlier stories I decided to read be-rad and man in motion over again and i fell in love with the stories all over again... thank you mark for sharing such a wonderful writing talent. ps. i did want to point out though that the link to chapter 27 of man in motion seems to have disappeared.
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