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Wow that was definitely a cliff hanger.... This chapter really brought a lot of the same emotions I felt the day it actually happened. Now I wait with a heavy heart to see what happens next. Thank you mark for the incredible story.

Be-Rad was the first story that i ever read of Mark's and it was Brad that captured by attention. i love a lot of the other characters too especially Stef, Robbie, JP, Jeff (RIP), Max, and Tonto(RIP), but my favorite character would have to be Brad!! though right now i'm also really liking matt because he's around my age he graduated high school in 1998 and i graduated in 1997 so i can sorta relate

Aloha Mark!! I just wanted to wish you a very Happy Anniversary and many more to come:hug:!! Your stories are awesome:great: and I can't thank you enough for sharing them with us. :worship: ~jc

Wow I was definitely not expecting this chapter until Friday ~ But it is more than welcome anyways! That was definitely an emotional chapter....I had a feeling that Greg was going to be axed...you've been hinting it since the start..how his job and health is going to kill him...i just wasn't expecting it so soon. Like the others I thought it might have been an eye opener for him...but not the case indeed. Lou coming back in the picture...hmm I don't know about him. For some reason I never really was into his character since he was first introduced in MIM. The only part i ever connected with his character was when Stef found out during Christmas that he was the boy from the time he and brad had visited his old apartment. But this chapter alone it seems that he could be en route to changing his lifestyle for the better. I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm definitely rooting for JP and Stef to get together....they've both lost their partners and this might be the perfect time.... Thanks Mark!! I'm crossing my fingers that the next chapter will come out sooner than later

I agree this is getting a bit out of control. But Dragon and Galahad have made their point..there is a separate thread for technical points!!

that was a great chapter. i'm glad greg had finally come to his senses and made things right not just with Stef but with Robbie as well. but as everyone is saying i don't think this is the end of it hehehee i can't wait to see what's stiring in the pot

aloha Mark!! Chapter 12 was great as expected. It looks like there's some trouble going about with Capt Knight but George sure knows how to handle it . as always mahalo for sharing and thank you (and the rest of team) for all your hard work

woohoo!!! even better if i don't have to wait the whole week hehehe

Now this story really took me by surprise!! When I saw it posted (through my phone while I was work) I had to read it. I love your stories so much Mark I'd risk getting in trouble or worse getting fired at work just to read them LOL! I definitely enjoyed having Stefan back as narrator...I loved the Land Whore and from the first chapter alone I think If It Fits might top it Stef and Brad are definitely my favorite. I loved the way Stef handled Benjamin that was just classic. Now I just gotta be patient and wait a whole week for the next chapter As usual, thank you Mark for all your hard work

oooh wow chapter 11 was definitely worth the wait...the hanging...the lashing...those buggers had it coming. from the look of things it looks like george and julian are getting pretty tight!!! i noticed how they don't have sex anymore they "make love"! can't wait to see what's gonna happen next

hmmm any day of the week is fine by me.... i usually sneak in through my phone while i'm at work to see if any new chapters are posted geez i hope my boss doesn't see this but if i have to pick a day i'll go with Sunday

definitely sneaky but it's all good so long as there's another hanging this time for buggery instead of mutiny muahahaha

you weren't kidding!! chapter 10 was awesome!!! from the unfolding events i can only guess who's going to be axed in chapter 11 a big mahalo as always for sharing your ingenious writing talent

that would be so awesome to link the two series in this and possibly other ways !!!!

i just realized something...George Granger....by any chance would he be like an ancestor of Max Granger? LOL

i'm sure it will be i can't wait!!!! you must work like a ninja to get all these chapters out in the blink of an eye

wow looks like George is a busy man in chapter 9 LOL. a reunion with Iggy...something i definitely wasn't expecting..but then adding Paolo for a threesome was just beyond me hahaha. to top it all off he's gonna be a daddy!!!! (if the rumors are true). but alas it seems George is not the happiest camper going back to the Victory....hopefully he'll find someone to cheer him up and now just 2 more chapters till.........

lol that would be some great advertisement!! goes to show how good a writer is but getting getting back to mr. granger, i thought chapter 8 was awesome. history tells us what happens in Toulon 1793..i wonder what mr. granger's role will be...maybe meet a young frenchman named napoleon LOL. can't wait till for next chapters.

i was going to say Blackwell!!! but he isn't on the list

whoa only a few chapters till then...dum dum dum...hopefully it won't be as morbid 1968...i lost my appetite to eat for two weeks (and that's saying a lot) after reading that..so depressing

lol yes that would definitely be a surprise!! LOL

great chapter as usual. it seems that mr. granger and mr. travers have been caught LOL. lo and behold soon as they separate granger finds himself a new friend James robey who also happens to be travers' ex (if u could call James Robey that)....such a small world isn't it . all these characters intertwined with each other....i love it i love it.. can't wait for the next one.

i loved the story...though i'm not sure if chapter 22 was the last chapter...the posting on this from was about a year ago. i'm kinda left on a cliffhanger...please let me know if there's more or if you're still working on more chapters great writing and keep up the excellent work

a very uplifting chapter. i was happy that everything turned out for the best and that wilcox and cheadle got what they deserved. mr. granger did a wonderful job...and when the time comes that would be another book in this series woohooo!! Captain Granger hehehee

wow i was gone just a few days and two chapters posted. i'm really enjoying where things are going...i'm glad mr. granger and travers were able to spend some time together all be it a short one...i'm still rooting for them ....i also can't wait to see what goes with the Desperate...hopefully mr. granger will find mr. roberts in good fortune but with the mutiny on the rise it might be a sticky situation. i think Wilcox is behind it all...that landlubber ~ thanks mark can't wait for the next chapters to post.