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Sorry to hear the reception to the last chapter was tepid. I have been with you since the release of chapter one, and I'm still reading! Perhaps you are getting different reactions because you are now in the thick of the story, a story of such depth that we didn't realise what we were getting into when we began reading. Now the end of each chapter is a painful experience as we know we must wait for the next one! I love your writing, and I hope you continue to craft this story with the love you have shown for it thus far.

Another fantastic chapter. Your skills in slowly revealing your plotline are fantastic! Can't wait for more!

Woohoooo! Awesome chapter!

Another brilliant chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Another good chapter, but all the hints you are dropping are making me nervous! Can't wait to see what is up with simon and what peters secret is

Another excellent installment! Bravo!

Still loving this story keep it coming! I wonder if we will see any more of Tim?

Very promising! Just wanted to say I didnt find the genetic disorder part ambiguous at all. Seems like a very clever way to have set things up actually. Can't wait to read more!