So, this is my first post in the forum.
I'm interested to see what people think of this chapter. I was a little unsure about it. So far the only feedback I've gotten is in regard to typos.
Conner, you really summed everything up nicely in your post. Before reading it, I thought the story was pretty straightforward, but having read your brief summary I'm not so sure ...
What I really wanna know is, if you guys could get rid on any character in the story, which would it be? Who do you think will turn out to be the "bad guy"? And like, how would you feel if that character died or moved or something?
Matt