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Matthew PazCastillo

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    the unknown...

    I say like about six feet tall, medium brown kind of wavy thick hair, brown or hazel eyes, nice build, great ass... and awesome smile with kissy lips... So close, except I have very dark curly brown hair and I actually have blue eyes. Matt
  2. Yeah, So, I feel like I've figured Troy out, but I have no idea who Liam is. It's like, in the beginning a lot of people could relate to him, and now he's turned into this character that no one really likes and .... I dunno. Maybe I'm doing a shitty job [and I've TRIED to stay out of it until now. Believe me I really tried to let the readers do as much analyzing as they want] but LIAM IS INSECURE. That
  3. Thanks for the welcome you guys. I'm not even sure how this all works. Ann, I was gonna email you ... are my stories up on this site? I'm not a moderator here, so I have no idea. Matt
  4. So, this is my first post in the forum. I'm interested to see what people think of this chapter. I was a little unsure about it. So far the only feedback I've gotten is in regard to typos. Conner, you really summed everything up nicely in your post. Before reading it, I thought the story was pretty straightforward, but having read your brief summary I'm not so sure ... What I really wanna know is, if you guys could get rid on any character in the story, which would it be? Who do you think will turn out to be the "bad guy"? And like, how would you feel if that character died or moved or something? Matt
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