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  • Celethiel
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  • 04/16/2013
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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The Whispering - 2. Seeing the Lad

Seeing the Lad
By J.A. Oshio

The little sparks
They tell me my sins
Circling like sharks
Each with razor fins

I am alone
And I am the last
And I cannot atone
Even though I asked

We made our choices
But they get in your head
With babbling voices
That fills you with dread

One by one
To each they spoke
Now I run
From what we woke

I may go mad
While I claw at the dark
Seeing the lad
And where I left my mark

Nothing but a hoe
I should not care
About what I owe
This isn’t fair

I have a son
Oh please let me go
Oh what have I done?!
Oh please god no!

Copyright © 2013 Celethiel; All Rights Reserved.
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Celethiel
On 04/20/2013 07:56 AM, comicfan said:
hoe? Were you stretching to make that rhyme. It seems like a father trapped here but not exactly sure. Interesting poem none the less.
no actually I wasn't...

The "father" beat up/abused the guy in the previous chapter and thought of him as a hoe... it's well connected and explained in the next chapter I Hope :)

I wanted them to connect together into a story.

Celethiel
On 04/20/2013 09:52 AM, Yettie One said:
In a way I felt like I was in the hunger games as I was reading this. :P

That was till I got to the end, then I guess like Wayne I was wondering if it was about someone who's just realised that he's a dad, and maybe don't deserve to be one!

:/

I wanted a sense of fear and of confusion in this...

Like the person being spoken of doesn't quite understand why he's being punished and yet he is...

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