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What is Love? - 1. Chapter 1

"Kasey, What's up? Long time no speak." I said struggling to hold my cell phone with my shoulder. I started walking to my car from my afternoon appointment.

"Well, well if it isn't my best friend and fellow birthday boy. What are your plans for tonight?"

"Oh you know, just the usual, a quiet night at the house. I've got a proof of concept project due in a few weeks and I need to hammer down a few details when it comes to the programming. This new client is demanding a lot of features."

"Where is the fun in that? If the proof isn't due for a few more weeks, and you’ve just started, surely you can find the time to spend with your awesome, and most favorite lifelong friend." He asked.

"Oh, when is your sister coming to visit me?"

"Not funny, smartass! I was referring to me."

"Holy shit...!" I exclaimed. "When did you get in town? Last I heard from your mom, she told me you had been giving some serious thought to taking an offer from the CIA and leaving us all for a few years."

"I’ve had to deal with some real heavy stuff lately, so a doctor pulled me out on medical leave and thought if you could stomach it, I'd crash with you for a little while. I only just landed at the airport less than an hour ago."

Well shit, for the first time in memory my best friend almost sounded like he was pleading to come stay with me. Kenneth Clarkson, my big tough FBI agent best friend sounded like he needed me. I thought about it for only a few seconds then replied.

"Of course you can stay with me at the house. I'll apologize now for it being a mess but you know one of the spare bedrooms is always available for ya." I replied. By now I had reached my car and climbed in. "When should I expect you?"

"Well, I hopped in a taxi as soon as I landed and grabbed my bags. I gave the driver your address, so I should be there in another 10 minutes." He said sounding relieved.

"Shit, had I know that you were coming I would have left the office earlier, I just got in my car, I won't be home for another 20 minutes myself."

"It's cool, I don't mind waiting. It will probably cost a little extra to have the driver wait for you to show."

"Well if you remember the code I set for you, you can let yourself into the house. If you forgot just let yourself into the backyard and chill out on the patio furniture. I'm on my way home now."

"Sweet, see you soon man!" He said.

With that I hung up my cell phone and took a few seconds to gather my thoughts. I was going to see my closest friend for the first time in 9 years. I started my car and made for the highway. I couldn't wait to see him! He'd been my best friend for my whole life. Hell our mother’s were best friends and actually had us on the same day. We'd done everything together right up until we turned 21. Then he suddenly decided to drop out of school and start working in Law Enforcement. I stayed in school to finish the Digital Forensics degree we had both been working towards. When he told me, it was a like my whole world shattered, but I supported him 110%.

I made it to the house in just over 25 minutes thanks to some idiot drivers on the highway. I pulled into the garage and climbed out of my Tiguan. I hit the button to close the garage door and stepped into the house. "Ken?" I called out as I stepped into the laundry room. "Are you inside?" Not hearing any reply I walked thru the kitchen to the mudroom which had a door leading to the backyard. I opened and stepped out onto the deck. "Kasey?" I looked around but didn't see anyone. I shrugged my shoulders, thinking that somehow I must have beat him getting home. I started walking back to the door when I felt 2 massive arms close around me and lift me up.

"Boo!" he cried.. I screamed in response.

"Jesus Fucking Christ on a cracker Kasey! What are you trying to do kill me? Come on put me down!" I demanded.

He started to laugh at me but complied and set me back on my feet. I turned around to look at my oldest friend standing in front of me. I was relieved to see that nothing had changed too much in 9 years. Ken grew a couple more inches and topped out just over 6' tall. He had let his dark blonde hair grow a little longer than he had kept it in college. I would have to guess that he had to shave every day now based off the stubble that lined his jawline. His blue eyes still screamed troublemaker. The one big change in him though was how much he had bulked up. Instead of the lean muscled surfer boy I had grown up with was a well muscled man who just looked intimidating. I immediately hugged him which was returned with gusto.

"It's so good to see you Kase. I've missed you!"

"It's damn good to see you too Lexi."

After a few moments we broke the hug and backed away from each other a little bit.

"So how long were you looking to stay with me while you're on leave?" I asked.

"I was hoping you wouldn't be opposed to me spending all of my time here." He replied bashfully. "Well not counting some day trips to see the family. No one else really knows I'm home yet. I wanted to take a few days to get my head on straight first before I surprise everyone."

"Of course you can stay here. You know I'd never turn away my best friend. By the looks of you, I’m going to need to make another trip to the store tomorrow. Of course you realize that our families are going to kill me if they find out I've been harboring you here without telling them.” I grinned at him. “Then again I've gotten into trouble from all of them for less. Come to think of it that typically was thanks to you as well." I chuckled.

Ken broke out with a big smirk on his face. "Yeah, that sounds about right. So are you going to show me around this place or what?"

 
This is my first serious attempt at writing one of the many many stories that I seem to find myself creating in my head. I don't mind criticism though.
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I like stories with adults and cops/feds, etc... YUM! Stories with best friends can be intriguing. They know each other so well, yet it's a whole new ballgame for them. Good start. I would suggest you think about the POV you are using, and how that person would share the story. For example, you wouldn't talk to someone and say 'I said into the phone' when it's your POV. You'd think about what you said, and what you did. To let the reader know he's talking on the phone you could narrate him switching to a hands free device or tucking the phone against his shoulder, etc... I would also suggest that you check out the dialogue punctuation topic pinned in the Writer's Corner. Knowing what to use/when with speech tags versus narration threw me in the beginning and that helped me immensely. If you are interested in getting more personal feedback prior to posting, you can place a post in the Editor's Corner to see if any site members will volunteer. My best advice: Keep writing! :)

Terrific first chapter, JT!

 

I'm wondering why Kasey (and where did he get that nickname from the name Ken? lol), had to take a medical leave. Was it b/c of some project he was working on for the FBI?

 

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, and laundry room and best friend should not be capitalized, unless 'laundry' or 'best' are the beginning of the sentence. =)

On 02/19/2014 03:32 AM, Cia said:
I like stories with adults and cops/feds, etc... YUM! Stories with best friends can be intriguing. They know each other so well, yet it's a whole new ballgame for them. Good start. I would suggest you think about the POV you are using, and how that person would share the story. For example, you wouldn't talk to someone and say 'I said into the phone' when it's your POV. You'd think about what you said, and what you did. To let the reader know he's talking on the phone you could narrate him switching to a hands free device or tucking the phone against his shoulder, etc... I would also suggest that you check out the dialogue punctuation topic pinned in the Writer's Corner. Knowing what to use/when with speech tags versus narration threw me in the beginning and that helped me immensely. If you are interested in getting more personal feedback prior to posting, you can place a post in the Editor's Corner to see if any site members will volunteer. My best advice: Keep writing! :)
Thanks for the feedback Cia, I'll definitely be checking out the Writers and Editors corners for tips on helping improve my skill.
On 02/19/2014 05:16 AM, Lisa said:
Terrific first chapter, JT!

 

I'm wondering why Kasey (and where did he get that nickname from the name Ken? lol), had to take a medical leave. Was it b/c of some project he was working on for the FBI?

 

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, and laundry room and best friend should not be capitalized, unless 'laundry' or 'best' are the beginning of the sentence. =)

I'll be going into the past of their childhoods somewhere in the next couple of chapters. I think chapter 2 is pretty well blocked out, but I'll take a look at things and see what I can drum up. If not chapter 2, definitely chapter 3.

I'm hopeful, but, feeling churlish, I'll withhold the like for now. "Best friend" stories can be great, trite, or anything in between. (No pressure! :P ) Elaborating on earlier comments: Ken Clarkson -> KC -> Kasey, unless you prove me wrong :/. Of the half-dozen times you wrote "best friend", you capitalized once, so perhaps you intended emphasis? (Italics for that.) Or are you referencing the play "Best Friends"? Speed bump for the reader. Lower case is probably better. To me your POV is clear, but your first sentence is a weak start. I like Cia's suggestions about that.

As has been said, 21 years of close friendship followed by 9 year of separation present rich opportunities for you to exploit. Looking forward to more!

On 02/19/2014 12:45 PM, knotme said:
I'm hopeful, but, feeling churlish, I'll withhold the like for now. "Best friend" stories can be great, trite, or anything in between. (No pressure! :P ) Elaborating on earlier comments: Ken Clarkson -> KC -> Kasey, unless you prove me wrong :/. Of the half-dozen times you wrote "best friend", you capitalized once, so perhaps you intended emphasis? (Italics for that.) Or are you referencing the play "Best Friends"? Speed bump for the reader. Lower case is probably better. To me your POV is clear, but your first sentence is a weak start. I like Cia's suggestions about that.

As has been said, 21 years of close friendship followed by 9 year of separation present rich opportunities for you to exploit. Looking forward to more!

Thanks Knotme. You're right on the nickname. For me I prefer writing Kasey over K.C. to go along with that I have more freedom to toy around with altering the nickname when it's written out as Kasey. I know my first chapter was rough, I'll definitely give it a comb over in the next day or so and should have chapter 2 in the pipeline for next week. Thanks for the feedback, and the pressure! LOL :-)
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