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Spinning - a poem - 1. Chapter 1

Only one short poem so there is only the one "chapter". Hope to post my story shortly. Thanks for reading and please feel free to leave a comment.

Spinning

by ~ Wayne

Spinning like a crazy wheel
turning round in wild circles.
Going round and round
never knowing which way is up.
Trying all the different paths
but find none that work.

Seasons change from one to the next
and years float on and on.
Yet you don't want to go just yet.
You stand and wait for a sign
and it never seems to come.

Some settle for what they find,
others twist and roll around.
The heart wanders all about,
and the mind flys so far away.
Anguish is daily friend
and so is loneliness.

Happiness is quick visitor.
Shock can numb you so.
Yet the circles are ever there
and growing year by year.
The paths are overgrown
flooded by your tears.

When are you going to stand up?
When will you stop the twists?
When will you surrender and create a new world?
I'm just waiting here.
I'm just as lost as you.
I just waiting here .....

.... always waiting here .......

.... waiting here for you.

Copyright © 2011 comicfan; All Rights Reserved.
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On 08/12/2011 01:39 AM, Mark92 said:
Aawwwwww Comic moving and sweet at the same time :hug::)
It is sort of one of those things where the one who loves you is right there but you ignore them. Yet they waste away waiting for something that might never come to be. Been there and done that and so not pleasant.
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On 09/24/2011 02:58 PM, Renee Stevens said:
I don't read a lot of poetry but I really enjoyed reading this one from you. The waiting game is never a fun thing.
No, waiting is never something I am very good at. Glad you like it Renee.
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Man, I could feel the emotions slapping me in the face here. Waiting around and uncertainty in a relationship takes a hard toll on anyone.

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On 06/22/2012 06:57 AM, joann414 said:
Man, I could feel the emotions slapping me in the face here. Waiting around and uncertainty in a relationship takes a hard toll on anyone.
Wow, you are making the rounds through my stuff Joann. Most of it is fairly light. Glad you enjoyed it.
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