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RIP - Comicality
    jian_sierra
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  • 02/27/2011
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Confusion - 1. Chapter 1

More means less

When understanding

Lacks

Over and over

Yet still the same

Knowledge is beyond

Grasp

Tossing, turning

Frustratingly damning

Whoever said

Older means wiser?

First a thought

Then another

Before long

A thousand thoughts

In one small vessel

Wondering what

Happened

How did this

Happen?

Tired of thinking

Introspection

Became

Self-litigation

It’s a win-lose

Situation

Tried to be busy

Worked for a while

Worked less and less

Not working anymore

Nothing goes right

Everything feels weird

Odd

Strange

Even weird sounds creepy

Which in itself is weird

Don’t know what to do

A real cliffhanger

Something like

This....

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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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carringtonrj

I like the ending. You have some really interesting thoughts and your language develops as it advances, really interesting.

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On 07/18/2011 03:52 AM, carringtonrj said:
I like the ending. You have some really interesting thoughts and your language develops as it advances, really interesting.
Can you believe this is the first poem I've ever written for the site? Thank you for your kind words, they are very much appreciated.
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