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  • jrhyder
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  • 12/24/2014
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Breathless Words to Find My Own - 1. i took your words and made them my own

A short poem created by rearranging the words of a dating site message.

It’s really hard to put words to myself.
I never know where, but I’m the type of guy that loves
Long walks in the woods,
Holding hands, and who I am with

Know I’m safe

With them I want to live near a beach
Someday in Washington, Oregon,
Or Colorado Rockies.
For now I love in woods, Idaho, finding them
Hopelessly Romantic of sorts, I try to catch
Before fall, my favorite color is green,
Run, work, read, write, learn, and people
Watching is fun, fit with Psych and training,
I write poetry, and things get interesting.
I love tea leaves discreet and
Professionally fun, rolling, resilient,
I’ve been through building up,
I aspire to be true and dream higher
Complex, East and West,
In my younger years and we are all innocence.
Left out and messaging for you.

A short poem created by rearranging the words of a dating site message.
Copyright © 2014 jrhyder; All Rights Reserved.
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AC Benus

It's very innovative and extremely well done. Once, a long time ago now, I was at poetry reading where a Canadian poet (a woman) had created 'found' sonnets by going through Gay porn, pulling out 10 syllable lines, stinging them together, and concluding it with a couplet from one of Shakespeare's Sonnets.

 

I laughed out loud at one point in the reading, and the woman made a point of finding me later and telling me I did good. The room was much too stuffy before I broke the tension.

 

Anyway, if you are willing, please explore this technique a bit more. You've done it really well here!

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