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MuddyRiverGirl's Poetry Collection - 1. Free Falling

Free Falling (A Trio of Poems) - MuddyRiverGirl

I. I am free falling

Flying through the sky

Rain hits my face

Lightening strikes me high

Thunder wrecks my veins

Clouds float underneath

Sleet like a wreath on my head

Snow ensnares my feet

Hail breaks my legs.

 

 

II. She is free falling
 
Flying up so high
 
Rained on by and by
 
Lightening hits her wide
 
Thunder shakes her frame
 
Clouds float down below
 
Sleet engorges her body
 
Snow rips away at her clothes
 
Hail harms her heart.
 
 

III. You are falling free

Tumbling up so high
 
Rain runs down you quick
 
Lightening pierces your sides
 
Thunder forks though your frame
 
Clouds drift softly in the undertow
 
Sleet erupts down onto your back
 
Snow shakes into your wrath
 
Hail tosses you around as if a tumbler.
 
Just a poetry experiment with a trio of similar poems in next chapters, to make one poem. :lol:
I will be uploading more poetry soon! :D
Thank you so much for reading, commenting, and liking! :hug:
Please check out my other works and it is much appreciated. ^_^
2012 MuddyRiverGirl
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I don't have a huge review to write. This is the first poem I'm reading in a while, and it's a good one. Looking forward to the next one:)

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On 10/01/2012 04:12 AM, Michael9344 said:
I don't have a huge review to write. This is the first poem I'm reading in a while, and it's a good one. Looking forward to the next one:)
Thank you so much! :) That really means a lot to me :D
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