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There and Back Again. - 4. Chapter 4: When the world went away

I am not good at poetry, prose or anything that falls into that category. I wrote this without anything in mind (well to make it resemble something of a jargled poem of sorts) my feeble attempts to possibly rhyme can be seen. But, this was pushed out on text last night and I felt it was worth for 'There and back again' to post here. Albeit the "newbish"ness of it. And you know, after thinking about it, exploring other creative avenues is alright, too.

When the world went away

 

It was dreary the day

when the world went away

through brimstone and twilight

combat against all angels did sway

we fought forever until the day

when the world went away

 

A stoic defense we mustered

against the fiery luster of brands

Blood ran like water

and nothing ever seemed the same

that day,

When the world went away

 

At first, yes, first

victory was in our grasp

but the bellow of a trumpet

on high,

sent cold through the sky

Thunder roared and

the clouds shattered

into thousands of shards

They thirst for our defeat

that day,

when the world Went away

 

There was no chorus

no luminescent gates of yore

Merely death

nothing more

a fitting punishment for us, yes, us

How we had sinned

so it was only fitting

when,

they took our world away

Copyright © 2011 thatboyChase; All Rights Reserved.
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