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Planet Redemption: Episode One

   (1 review)
Genres: Horror, Mystery, Thriller/Suspense, Science Fiction
Sub-genres: Suspense, Horror - Modern, Soft Sci-Fi, Light Mystery

Danni Aarmodt is exiled to Planet Redemption, a penal planet a hundred years away from Earth. Frozen for the trip, he wakes up on a new planet in Colony 12. Soon Danni learns that survival on Planet Redemption is the only currency. The only person he can trust is himself. As if that's not bad enough Colony 12 discovers something that is equally fascinating and terrifying in nature...and it's been buried underneath the ice for millions of years.

Warning: This story is very dark and gritty. If you are easily triggered do not read!
 
2017 Valentine Davis

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  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 0
  • Characters 1
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 1
  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 1
  • World Building 0
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knotme 588

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

Bleak. Dismal. Hopeless. Many a movie tries for this, but they almost all fall sort of good fiction; they’re too explicit for their own good. Looking past the compelling atmosphere, I try to identify with people; Diana and Danny most interest me. For Diana, Danni presents an opportunity, a bit of flexilibity, a broadening of the narrow track that she had simply trudged along. For Danni, this place is, remarkably, and improvement. Does it come too late?

 

Rethinking this episode for a review reminded me of the famous Twilight Zone episode, “It’s a Good Life,” arguably the most harrowing story on any screen. Danni resembles Anthony only in that power is all out of proportion to empathy. But whereas the TW episode is utterly without hope, the arrival of Danni is a ray of hope. Maybe.

 

The stage is set. We’ve met the actors. Let the show unfold! 4 stars for promise.

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