Lateral Guilt

[Jason Rimbaud]

Lateral Guilt

By: Jason R.

Written October 27th, 2006

 

You are the place I

[Menzoberranzen]

I like this piece in a very vague way; It's hard to pin-point why I like it. It's succinct, straightforward and almost feels like it's a few stanzas from a larger piece. Very nice.

 

Menzo

[Jason Rimbaud]

You're right Menzo,

 

Lateral Guilt is, for lack of a better word, a small interlude right in the middle of a much longer piece. I think of it as a bridge from one piece to the next.

 

This super poem, fifty-three pieces total, was written last year and told a single story chronicling the summer I turned 24.

 

I can't believe you picked up on that, kind of amazing but very cool. That leads me to believe that you really like to read poetry, and that you try to understand it as well. Nice.

 

Thanks for the words

 

Jason R.

[AFriendlyFace]

Well, I was going to agree with Menzo...but now it'll just look like I'm ripping him off in terms of insight

 

In any case, I like it as well and did note that it seemed to be a part of the saga you discuss in your other poems.

 

 

Well done,

Kevin