Jason Rimbaud

PS Cassie, this is exactly the kind of story I love.

If you think this is the last time I'll be touching on this comment, we are both wrong.

Oh I'm caught up, and I do enjoy the story, all ten chapters, but from here on out it slips into my sweet spot. .

So I'm caught up. And I know you are the author, and gave us a bit of insight into Rhaelce switching to his POV (I shan't comment on that trick) and you plainly wrote he foiled a plan to hurt The Malik. Which would mean my earlier assumption was wrong. Well, you'd be wrong in assuming that. I just realized that drawings I saw of Thirdly is all about Rhaelce. I kind of felt a bit foolish as I picture him a bit more like the lizard people in V the Final Battle. I enjoyed this chapter, minus the nightmare, and it looks like I might have been wrong about Rhaelce motivations but I think I'm right about the foursome being around for a while.

Another mis-matched couple. Also searching for a way home. It stands to reason that one portal, must be more. This doesn't bang any alarm bells, unless Cassie is being vague. I think this is a foursome that will be together for a long time. I mean, Thirdly drew them which means they are part of the team. So they've been gone for over a month, so they weren't near a coast, and they are still in the wood area. I'd be interested to know how Chi and friend met. I'm sure will find out more over the coming chapters.

So full disclosure, I never bought the reason Malik was asked "Can Run". I don't think the mother wants to hurt The Malik. I think there is a desire to get revenge on whatever hurt his sister. And he used that as an excuse to manipulate The Malik. The high priest could have killed Malik long ago, so I doubt he'd be behind a plot now. If the mother is coming for them, I say she wants to bring them back. I'll see if I'm write when she catches up to them. she will, hunters never let their prey get away. Great worldbuilding and I'm glad a took a few weeks off so I can binge whilst the husband put the kitchen back together.

So we all know you can write emotions and make things heartfelt. But what got me was "can run". Yes! The Malik, run. I thought about him getting blame, a curse, a pox, brought upon that house. He wasn't really liked anyway. Better to go, I'll follow you to the mountains. Great chapter, just a bit better than the ones proceeding it.

So I think once again I am of difference opinion than others. I didn't have feelings about the little ones good or bad. I see this as simply a fact of life on this world/universe/reality. I think what makes this chapter so good is how Malik tries to find a way to fit in during a time of grief. It also give him the reason to head towards the mountains now there will be searching for "revenge". I think showing this dynamic is important for character development, but I am ready for the story to progress away from domestic life and experience more of this world.

SO I had a great idea for this contest. THe problem, I'm barely into the story and already at 50K words. The cutoff is 30K. I don't know how to write a short story.

Thank you! I was seeing the reactions come through and I was tickled that you seemed to be flying through it. I am working on Part Two, and after three chapters of two other stories are posted, the next thing I post with be Part Two, that is my next project. So thank you for your comment. Full Disclosure: I am doing my re-writes of Part Two, so it might be a bit before I feel like I could post the chapters. But it should be before the end of this year. Thank you again.

I constantly go back and revise my story chapters and I don't mention it to anyone. The important part is the story, how many people read the comments vs just read the words you shared.

So Jason Rimbaud & I made a video for R. There, I fixed it for you.

You haven't showered for 10 days straight. Why? What are the consequences? This hit a bit too close to home! It wasn't ten days, but after my surgery it was multiple days I went without a proper shower. The consequences, the husband tried to kill me in the shower. True story, not ten days ago. .

If that is indeed your luggage, I don't see any undies, so you are already behind the eightball! Truthfully, I don't think body counts matter. How many or how few? Nor do I think its healthy to worry that you have been missing out due to your lack of partners. However....I have two friends who are in an open relationship, let's call them M and F. It wasn't M's idea, but they have been open for almost two years. F had a very traumatic incident when he was younger that all but killed his sex drive. And the older he got, the more it manifested itself into a complete lack of interest. M has a high sex and F began to feel his lack of interest was causing problems in their marriage. So he suggested opening it up so M could experience sex. They worked out a series of rules and then redefined them as issues came up. Until they settled on five rules that worked. According to both of them, they are better now, that F no longer feels pressure to satisfy M. M is getting that biological need fulfilled, and they are actually going out on dates again. For them, it did wonders. I think people put too much importance on sex and monogamy. I've had sex with lots of people but never found the intimacy I've found with my husband just sitting next to one another. So if you are wanting to open it up, and your partner seems in agreement, I'd suggest rules, and then be safe but have some fun.

I am recovering from ankle surgery, had a nasty fall a few weeks ago and have three screws on my foot. sorry for the delay.

I am recovering from ankle surgery, had a nasty fall a few weeks ago and have three screws on my foot. sorry for the delay.

Finally!!!! Myr the Artful Dodger! I believe you spell sir S I R...

As I do with all things requested of me, I am up to date. (full disclosure I keep my profile up to date because I have issues). But because I'm laid up in bed for the next week at least, I have too much time on my hands. And remember I am heavily medicated at the moment. So...is your about me page up to date? Like you need to improve on perfection Fabulous One! Methinks you are timeless, Chris!

Because evil wizard an all. I use dark mode to read stories, light mode when I'm causing chaos around the forums. Which basically means, my phone is dark mode, my laptop is light mode.

Nope, I think I'll skip this year as I did last year. I'll let better people tackle this Secret Author contest. I'll sit back and watch all the chaos without participating or causing it for a change.

NOt gonna lie, I never saw that page/thread until you made me curious enough to go have a look. How can I be a member for twenty years and still not know anything about this site!

I'm not going to say much, as you are close to certain themes I don't want to address at this moment. But I did enjoy giving a glimpse at the reason why Gabriel is so cold and good at being detached. As for Gabriel going after Sean, let's hope nothing happens that might make Sean turn away.

Isn't high school angst so much fun! More to come from Billy and Dylan!

I love it, you're making your own rules!!!!! Long live Davide!

Now my comment won't make sense! I love it, anarchy the ole fashioned way!