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Jason Rimbaud

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  1. Hmm, let's say, you will get an explanation for all the questions you asked in this comment.
  2. Dunno, you tell me...
  3. As a student of history, I've read enough about that particular historical timeframe. The moment I learned the premise, I knew I would never be able to read it. Sorry SA, its not you, this is all me. I'm sure its a great story.
  4. Jason Rimbaud

    Chapter 10

    I have one tiny, minuscule complaint. The average person can walk through mountainous terrain about 6 to 10 miles a day. If, as you said, they could be months away from reaching this fourth peak, that's three hundred miles away if my math is mathing. They wouldn't be able to see that peak. The closer we get to The UnSpoken, yes I changed the way it is spelled, the more dangerous it becomes. And now that they have seen and heard it, fear is slowly creeping in. The only one who seems oblivious is The Wee One, who thinks all this is an adventure. The Flying One, who I now believe is the little offspring of The UnSpoken, wants to leave because they know the dangers ahead. The Malik might have made a bad decision, in that keeping The Wee One might come back to bite him in his tailess ass. The stakes are quickly ramping up, and I am thoroughly enjoying this tale muchly. And as much as I wish you would just post it all, I love the excitement I feel on Wednesdays, knowing the next day I get my next fix of The GA Avengers. This is by far my favorite story you've written. I love it!
  5. I chose #1 because I loved the idea of creating a recipe as the foil for the Forbidden Theme. Plus I loved the jokes and the idea of hot wings might have destroyed the world!
  6. Thank you. This is rather tame compared to my other stories. This is focused more on characters and conversations with little action. I like this story, its simple. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
  7. In the course of my career working in San Francisco as a Chef. I've met a ton of celebrities. They've run the gambit of nice to full-blown assholes. So, pretty much like all the other people in the world. The nicest celebrity I've met was Jon Bon Jovi. He frequented the restaurant I worked in for about three months. When he was alone, he'd hang out at the bar, drink wine, chat with the guests, and was super cool. When his family was with him, he wanted a private room and didn't want to be bothered by anyone. He seemed like a genuinely nice guy. Plus, he bummed so many cigarettes from me that, before he left town, he brought me a carton of cigarettes to replace the ones he took. I'm not sure if Thursday will become Tuesday, but stranger things have happened.
  8. Tuesday, August 5th, 1997 1101 Davis Way, Douglas Frienz Island Glacier Bay “I think that’s the only way it’s going to work,” Greg said as he finished going over his plan with Mrs. Winterbourne. “I agree. I can start working on this right away. I’ll call you back tomorrow and give you an update,” She assured him. He hung up the phone, and for the first time since his father died, he actually felt he had a clear path moving forward. He looked at his watch and saw
  9. I would love to meet Caden from Sweet Sour Paradox Logic. Anyone who loves experimenting with food, chicken wings, and likes cute boys who read. I'm so down to be friends. Plus he reminds me of someone I'd write.
  10. Same name and backstory, but a completely different character. . It will make sense at a later date, I promise. I think I'm in my experimental stage, there is a method to my madness. . I hope. Thank you for the comment.
  11. Thank you. I enjoyed exploring this concept a lot. And to write/right something on a more serious tone was harder than you might think. It takes place in San Francisco, I'm from there. It's all about Hot Wings, I own a Hot Wings restaurant. It mentions the Batman logo, anyone who received an email from me knows I use the Batman logo Maybe I did write/right it? Damn I don't remember. Though I do remember one joke, "the ghost of the chicken is strong with that one". Great joke .
  12. Thank you Chris!
  13. Its weird how you change only a few sentences and the entire tone switches. Thanks for urging me to finish it.
  14. Thank you for your wonderful comment.
  15. I do wish I made the dealine, I don't think anyone would have been able to guess I wrote it. . They all think I wrote the Hot wing story... . Thanks for your beautiful comments
  16. Thank you, I couldn't have said it better myself.
  17. I've been kicking this idea around for about a year. I wrote it about six months ago, and set it aside. I didn't have the ending yet. And when the Secret Author contest came and went without an ending, I knew I had to finish it. The ending came to me rather quickly and I'm rather proud of it overall. I managed to write something that stayed away from comedy and the usual silliness of my stories. Thanks for commenting.
  18. Josh & Konstantin have been friends, with benefits, since High School. But one has been stuck in the past and one in denial. After an explosive night of sex, they begin to face the things they hid for so long. As they get closer to the truth, secrets are revealed, and by the end of the night, one of them will learn the greatest lesson of their lives.
  19. Friday, July 3rd, 2015 San Francisco, Ca “Wow,” Josh Sawyer muttered as he collapsed on the bed. His breath came in big gulps, and his chest glistened with sweat. “What’s got you so worked up tonight?” Konstantin Spektor chuckled. He lay in the same position Josh had put him in ten minutes earlier. His face was buried in the sheets and his hips raised by a pillow. Konstantin groaned in satisfaction as he turned his head. Their eyes met, and he said, “Dunno. I guess I just reall
  20. Chef Andy thinks Blake is Smarmy! YOu're in good company
  21. Because you're the best! Sure seems like it. Nope Who knows, Glacier Bay isn't that big. Probably in the next chapter Being assistant to the CEO of NenTek, probably more than a few Hopefully by the end. I wonder, let's see what happens? Nope .
  22. Jason Rimbaud

    Chapter 9

    So our band of merry avengers all have special gifts except for the Taillie. Or is his gift not yet manifested? To be so close to the mountains, knowing that is where this story has been heading since chapter one, I am excited and can't wait to see what happens next. The Flying One, I still think is the fly in our ointment. I don't trust it. But I am enjoying the hell out of this story.
  23. Jason Rimbaud

    Chapter 8

    I really enjoyed this chapter. The Malik is able to actually physically start fire with his mind. And the Taillee asked the question I've been asking, can you throw it? There has to be more than what he's using with it. But I'm patient, I'll let that be disclosed on the author's time. So the Wee One's story is sad, a young girl rebutted by those who had accepted her. Me thinks there is more to the story of those who wield this type of power. Will we get more of that backstory later down the road? I hope so.
  24. Tuesday, August 5th, 1997 5150 Overlook Road, Overlook Bar & Grill Glacier Bay Unbeknownst to Greg, the moment he jumped, Justin followed a heartbeat later. And when he popped up to the surface a few yards away from the girl, he started looking around for Greg, but the boy never surfaced. He swam quickly over to the terrified girl and asked, “Are you okay?” “He’s not a good swimmer, he hasn’t come up yet,” She screamed out as she continued treading water, somehow going ar
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