Menzoberranzen Posted February 20, 2008 Posted February 20, 2008 Cold, broken and desperate; united only by their loneliness, I watch those poor wretches limning the harshly paved streets below Turning my gaze, I see the vaunted splendor of architectural marvels; Their revolving doors admitting black suits and silk ties. This grey twilight: a blending of day and night; poor and rich; weak and powerful; This
corvus Posted February 22, 2008 Posted February 22, 2008 As always, there's an interesting sense of ambivalence. "London is what they will never be
Menzoberranzen Posted February 26, 2008 Author Posted February 26, 2008 As always, there's an interesting sense of ambivalence. "London is what they will never be
Jason Rimbaud Posted February 26, 2008 Posted February 26, 2008 Hey Menzo By far, this is my favorite. I'll have to read it a few more times to give a better comment, but this good...reallly good. Jason
AFriendlyFace Posted June 5, 2008 Posted June 5, 2008 It was very vivid. I felt as though I was standing, peering out of a window down onto the streets myself. Nice job Kevin
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