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So I thought I'd post my first story... work in progress I guess.

 

Summary:

Jack is a young adult who recently graduated from college, jobless. Focusing on his previous failures in his lifetime, he begins to reevaluate his choices in life, desperately hoping for a better future.

 

I'm not writing a very over-the-top sci/fi story this time with to change destiny, but the main character will find that changing past actions may not have the outcomes he had expected while looking back in hindsight. What would he change, how would he cope?

 

I'd like to thank Frostina for editing and beta reading for me. She's amazing. ^_^

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/story/fmd/fixingmydestiny

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Yay for Obama's healthcare plan so that Jack could be covered, lol. Keepin' things current :) Oh yeah, and w/ the graduating and being jobless thing . . . definitely a current issue. I know many people in that boat.

 

Sleep apnea-- sounds tough. Poor guy.

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Yay for Obama's healthcare plan so that Jack could be covered, lol. Keepin' things current :) Oh yeah, and w/ the graduating and being jobless thing . . . definitely a current issue. I know many people in that boat.

 

Sleep apnea-- sounds tough. Poor guy.

 

True that Jay, U are addressing a few issues which have been plaguing the lives of many, all over the world.. so.. :P well.. all i can say is that u have a tough job ahead! :) :) all the best! :P and i am looking forward to more.. :D

 

Thanks btw! :) :) u r a swtheart! :D

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:worship:I'm keen to get into this one tonight!!!

 

Will let you know what I think.

 

Thanks for all the complies bud, it's really overwhelming. Read what you posted about The Script. Thank you, really.

 

Happy writing and Reading bud

Carl

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:worship:I'm keen to get into this one tonight!!!

 

Will let you know what I think.

 

Thanks for all the complies bud, it's really overwhelming. Read what you posted about The Script. Thank you, really.

 

Happy writing and Reading bud

Carl

 

Thanks! Chapter 2 is pending Frostina's wonderful editing skills, and hope to publish some time this week.

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What a ride!! :P

 

write faster! its getting interesting! :P

 

Um... I thought I'd hold up until you're done speed editing Cailen's 128,000 words for his Trilogy in Book 1 and his first two chapters of Book 2. Don't worry, I'm sure I can bombard you with more work afterwards ;)

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Um... I thought I'd hold up until you're done speed editing Cailen's 128,000 words for his Trilogy in Book 1 and his first two chapters of Book 2. Don't worry, I'm sure I can bombard you with more work afterwards ;)

 

I can always lend a hand if Frosty's busy. Don't use that as an excuse to stop writing!

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Um... I thought I'd hold up until you're done speed editing Cailen's 128,000 words for his Trilogy in Book 1 and his first two chapters of Book 2. Don't worry, I'm sure I can bombard you with more work afterwards ;)

 

 

Excuses.. excuses...

:o I have been bugging you for new chapters! :P and Cailen's in no hurry.. so.. I have time.. I just don't have chapters from you! :P

Stop making up excuses! :P get to writing!

 

I can always lend a hand if Frosty's busy. Don't use that as an excuse to stop writing!

 

:P Sara, did u really believe that? :o

if i was THAT hard pressed for time, you'd know! :P

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