albertnothlit Posted February 13, 2015 Posted February 13, 2015 (edited) The last chapter to my story Winterblade has been submitted, and I thought it would be good to open a discussion topic in case anyone is interested in reading it. The story is a mixture of fantasy, science fiction and erotica with two male protagonists. It deals with the conflict that arises when warriors of opposing armies get to know each other not only as the enemy, but as people being worthy of respect or even love.Any questions are welcome, and feedback is greatly appreciated! Thanks! Read it here: https://www.gayauthors.org/story/albertnothlit/winterblade Edited February 13, 2015 by albertnothlit 1
WestcliffWriter Posted February 13, 2015 Posted February 13, 2015 Hot warriors and big swords Ok you got my attention Will be taking a looksie at this! 1
Carlos Hazday Posted February 14, 2015 Posted February 14, 2015 It's a great premise, likeable characters and good writing. One major flaw I found was the length, too fucking short if you ask me! Looking forward to reading more of your writing 1
albertnothlit Posted February 16, 2015 Author Posted February 16, 2015 (edited) I'm starting to think I did cut the story a bit too short, from all the feedback I've been getting! I'll fix it the second part, though. If anything, I have a hard time keeping stories short. The temptation to go on and on and on is sometimes too strong and word limits can be a pain! Edited February 18, 2015 by albertnothlit
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