DarkShadow Posted September 9, 2006 Posted September 9, 2006 I have begun my third revision of this story. Now, only 15 chapters remain to be edited and corrected for continuity, disrepencies and flow. (now doesn't that sound like fun!) With any luck I'll be able to finish the final couple of chapters that complete this story. https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewstory.php?sid=162 I hope to hear your criticisms and suggestions soon. Take care!
DarkShadow Posted September 10, 2006 Author Posted September 10, 2006 I have begun my third revision of this story. Now, only 15 chapters remain to be edited and corrected for continuity, disrepencies and flow. (now doesn't that sound like fun!) With any luck I'll be able to finish the final couple of chapters that complete this story. https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewstory.php?sid=162 I hope to hear your criticisms and suggestions soon. Take care! ---- Chapter 2 has been revised and added. Hope to hear from you soon.
Dio Posted September 11, 2006 Posted September 11, 2006 Hmmm, quite a good story so far. It's worth a look folks!
DarkShadow Posted September 17, 2006 Author Posted September 17, 2006 Hmmm, quite a good story so far. It's worth a look folks! Thank you for your kind words. I have added Chapter 3. I hope future chapters will have the benefit of my new found editors. I have another 14 or so chapters to weed through, so I guess I had best get to work. Take care!
LittleBuddhaTW Posted September 18, 2006 Posted September 18, 2006 Shannon, Are you aware what your avatar means? It's hardly a flattering Chinese character ... LB
DarkShadow Posted September 18, 2006 Author Posted September 18, 2006 Shannon,Are you aware what your avatar means? It's hardly a flattering Chinese character ... LB LOL Well before I screwed with the picture... it was supposed to be 'Princess'. LOL It cracked me up! So... I had a little fun with it and made it my avatar. Now, if you can show me what Hime No Aku would look like, I'd really like to see that one!
LittleBuddhaTW Posted September 18, 2006 Posted September 18, 2006 LOL Well before I screwed with the picture... it was supposed to be 'Princess'. LOL It cracked me up! So... I had a little fun with it and made it my avatar. Now, if you can show me what Hime No Aku would look like, I'd really like to see that one! Well, it doesn't mean 'princess' ... it means 'concubine' or 'consort'. LB
DarkShadow Posted September 18, 2006 Author Posted September 18, 2006 Well, it doesn't mean 'princess' ... it means 'concubine' or 'consort'. LB LOL now that is funny.... I guess I'll leave it as it is then! I've been called worse.
DarkShadow Posted September 21, 2006 Author Posted September 21, 2006 Found a great editor. Though I am sure you all are wonderful editors. Chapters 1 and 2 have been rewritten (yes... lol again) and reposted. With any luck chapter 3 will be edited soon, and revised. Then...if all goes well, I can post the other 16 chapters! Take care!
DarkShadow Posted September 26, 2006 Author Posted September 26, 2006 Chapter 4 is edited and online! https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewstory.php?sid=162
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