Mathurin in Distress

[Bondwriter]

Here is a link to a gay erotica story, originally written in French, if it may be of interest to some. It is completely fantasy, and is intended as such, and is about fetish, bondage and light domination while trying to keep it entertaining. Input, feedback and criticism welcome.

[C James]

Here is a link to a gay erotica story, originally written in French, if it may be of interest to some. It is completely fantasy, and is intended as such, and is about fetish, bondage and light domination while trying to keep it entertaining. Input, feedback and criticism welcome.

 

I'm probably not qualified to comment, but my hunch is that you could smooth out some of the translations (in a few places the wording was slightly off) with the help of a good editor.

 

Multi-lingual people such as yourself have always amazed me: I have enough trouble writing in one language, and I can't even imagine trying it in two!

 

I liked the circumstances in the first chapter with the university and its policies.

 

CJ