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  1. Boy Mercury X
    Thanks @dboggs9700 - it's not the type of story I typically right at all. But it was fun to write and I'm glad you had fun!
  2. Boy Mercury X
    Thanks @dboggs9700 Jake has a long way to go, but you don’t have long to wait. Part two should drop tomorrow and part three the day after.
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    Passionfruit

    Boy Mercury X commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Passionfruit

    And one who likes to read!
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    Chapter 1: The Ghost on the Line The shrill blast of the whistle cut through the heavy thuds and squeaks of wrestling shoes on the practice mats. "Hustle, Timmons! You’re flat footed out there!" Coach Burgess barked. His voice echoed off the cinderblock walls of the high school gym. He wiped a hand across his jaw, feeling the rough scruff there. "Keep your hips down!" He spun his chair around in a swift pivot to track the heavyweight driving his opponent toward the edge of th
  5. Boy Mercury X
    Twenty years ago, Jake traded his body to survive, then fled to the Marines. Now a coach in a wheelchair, he thinks he's put his past behind him. But when Junior—the boy Jake betrayed—tracks him down, Jake must face the tangled knot of their shared history.
  6. Boy Mercury X
    Thank you @HTK. Your favorite read of 26 would be quite an honor. Glad I have eight months to try to top this.
  7. Boy Mercury X
    Thanks @J J. There are two more installments that might answer some of your questions, or hint at the answers.
  8. Boy Mercury X
    Ah. I'm a little envious. I have no practical skills whatsoever. That's why I work in strategic planning and business development. I'm good at it, but not the sort of thing that comes in handy in a zombie apocalypse. I'm the guy who would depends on others, probably hiding the fact that I was bitten by a zombie and about to be a disaster.
  9. Boy Mercury X
    Thank you @chris191070. Thanks for sticking with it.
  10. Boy Mercury X
    Thanks, @Howzat. I always look forward to your comments. One thing I personally liked, re the lease, was how they each needed to take some chances and get out of their comfort zone.
  11. Boy Mercury X
    So glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes I'm not 100% certain where to go in a story, but in this one, especially by the third installment, I knew everything without any doubt.
  12. Boy Mercury X
    I hope I didn't screw up any descriptions of the work, being not at all handy in that way.
  13. Boy Mercury X
    Thanks! You've got one installment left. I hope you find it satisfying.
  14. Boy Mercury X
    Mission accomplished.
  15. Boy Mercury X
    Thank you @dboggs9700, very glad to know you enjoyed it.
  16. Boy Mercury X
    @Cane23 I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I have to admit, the tense dinner was lifted from life, with the real life Dan inspiration's bigger than life dad insisting he'd be perfectly fine in one of those wicker chairs. Most tense meal of my life.
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    Chapter 1: The Flaw in the Scheme The dust in the Columbia City house hadn't even begun to settle. It hung in the air, catching the late afternoon light pouring through the bare, curtainless windows. We were tangled together on the canvas drop cloth in the center of the living room—and it wasn’t the only thing that had been gutted. My insides were still twitching, hypersensitive from the pounding my ex-brother-in-law Dan had just delivered. I could feel the wet slide of his cum an
  18. Boy Mercury X
    Thanks @Jack2. Glad you're enjoying it. The final installment, even more fleshed out, should be released tomorrow.
  19. Boy Mercury X
    You're so on the right track. Then there's the kids. Expect one family dinner that I have to admit I borrowed shamelessly from real life.
  20. Boy Mercury X
    You're so welcome. I think part two was in some ways a reverse of part one. But now that Rami and Dan have reached a balance, there's one more installment to go.
  21. Boy Mercury X
    Thanks @Cane23. Being this far along I'm not going to break the last installments into shorter parts, but I'll absolutely consider that for future stories that are longer.
  22. Boy Mercury X
    To be honest, it was fun to explore the "after" of the climax in the first story. Rami spent years being irritated by Dan, so it stands to reason that one sexual encounter is not a good basis for Dan to move into his tiny, curated apartment.
  23. Boy Mercury X
    Thanks, @Cane23. We've still got the final installment left, leaving room for everyone to learn and grow.
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    The Fit

    Boy Mercury X commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Fit

    Thanks, @Howzat buddy. Glad the plot twist worked. There's actually a second plot twist buried in there, more suggested as possible than stated. (I do think Sam is inviting Jakob to the big day!)
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    Chapter 1: Landslide My Queen-sized bed was not engineered for this. It was a sleek, low-profile platform frame—a discontinued prototype that I’d quietly diverted from a staging warehouse. It was designed for clean lines, minimalist aesthetics, and the occasional, efficient encounter with a guy of my own compact build. It was absolutely not designed to withstand the rhythmic, pile-driving force of a two-hundred-and-seventy-pound Sales Manager. The headboard slammed against th
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