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Young Sage

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  1. Thanks! I try so hard...
  2. Glad you enjoyed it!
  3. So You Want to Write Slash Hi there! I’m a non-certifiable writer of no major credentials outside of a couple short stories on a site not even a fraction of the U.S. population knows exists! And I heard, from a very special friend, that YOU want to write a homoerotic slash story! Well, that’s great! Good for you! And you know what? I’M here to help you along every step of the way! So come on! Let’s begin the fantastical journey that is writing gay fiction! First
  4. A how-to guide to writing your very own boys love story!
  5. I'm glad I made it towards the top of the list! Thanks!
  6. Young Sage

    Chapter 1

    I never want to make things so personal as to become uncomfortable. Or maybe I do. I forget. As for more stories like this one...I wouldn't suggest my other anthology entries, as they are more somber and/or dark. Um, maybe my other stories? Go, self-promoting! This whole story was written in one, rushed go, so I'm sure whatever you put together will be much better than this. Thanks for the review!
  7. Young Sage

    Chapter 1

    I'm pretty sure Inception copied off of me. Whoever wrote that one Donald Duck comic, too. Metafiction, as Slash Work illustrates, seems to be becoming my specialty. I hope I don't get typecasted. Thanks for the review!
  8. Young Sage

    Chapter 1

    Thanks! Eventually, I might write a story where BOTH characters are named! Wouldn't that be RADICAL?
  9. Young Sage

    Chapter 1

    Weird, as I have not posted this anywhere else and I'm fairly certain I didn't subconsciously copy this from anyone. I like to think there was much pain involved just after the story ended. Glad you liked the story!
  10. Young Sage

    Chapter 1

    I'm glad I, as the Joker would put it, "put a SMILE on your face." My first time (naughty naughty) was on fanfiction dot net and luckily my insane sense of non-sequitur humor went over well with the audience. Writing dialogue is much easier when you have MPD (don't listen to the liar!). Thanks for the review!
  11. I typed up the last few sentences and moved the mouse icon over the “Submit” button. I stared at the button for several seconds before finally willing myself to click on it. ‘There,’ I thought to myself. ‘I finally did it.’ I breathed a huge sigh of relief, glad that I was finally done with all the pressure. No turning back from this now. Although I guess I could always email the site admin and say that my final draft wasn’t my final draft, and that he shouldn’t use it for the upcoming antholo
  12. Not all decisions made come out smelling like roses, or chocolate chip cookies, or a freshly sexed bedroom, or a recently mowed lawn, or laundry detergent, or your favorite cologne/perfume.
  13. Nobody can resist the tempting lure of hitting Anthony square in the face. Even his friends get tired of him occasionally. Naturally, that's why he's in power at his high school. Shawn may be trying to coax Anthony out of the closet, but don't forget that Shawn wasn't exactly an open role model himself. Talk about selfish. GA doesn't allow for porn on the site, so I can't post any here. They're typically 15-20 pages in my Word files. I can send you them if you want. Just PM me. I believe the title was explained before somewhere; it's a purposely grammatically incorrect phrase I came up with because it just rolls off the tongue better. Thanks for the review!
  14. Young Sage

    Graduation

    Awesome that my notification system defaulted back to "tell me nothing." Are you saying my ending should've been happier? If so, you haven't been paying attention. I miss Shawn and Anthony, too. Luckily, a couple of oneshots have just been posted...
  15. Um...sure. The reason for the lack of formatting was just that. Yes. Totally. Everyone else is wrong. Haha. Ha. Um... TMTYLM, which, by the way, thanks for remembering exists, explicitly says that the narrator is named Jamie and the "love interest" Clint, so it's not Shawn and Anthony directly. But hey, any lines you want to draw are fine with me. Ambiguity and vagueness are kinda staples to my works, so a lot of things can "technically" be true. Off the top of my head, I don't know what Shawn and Anthony did for their high school reunion, though I do know it definitely was NOT going as a couple. Thanks for the review!
  16. I was starting to get curious and decided to read the story as a guest. Whoa...the document did NOT look like that when I uploaded it! There were spaces and everything, I swear! Unfortunately I'm booked this week so I can't get to fixing this until the weekend, but please reread through it again once I DO get it fixed! Sorry!
  17. I'm glad I got at least ONE person to think Shawn was actually dead. I'm sure Anthony post-being chewed out by Shawn, wasn't as glad of Shawn's survival instinct kicking in AGAIN. Shawn thinks he's the more manly of the two, but look at how many times he goes into PMS mode! I like the irony I made with him. Thanks for the reviews!
  18. How am I going soft? I let Shawn live with all his limbs? If so, I'm terribly sorry. For the paragraphs, I didn't want to retype the whole story so I copy+pasted everything and no indents (or italics) were showing up and I didn't want to add 12 spaces to everything so oh well. And who's evil reputation? I have one? Cool! The fantasy thingamajig is more Tolkien than anything, but rest assured a Young Sage plot twist is planned. Thanks for the reviews!
  19. Young Sage

    Dead Hour

    Just don't tell anybody over there that the story's on here now, and we'll be good to go! (I believe I set this and "Death..." to "exclusive" over there, but I'm virtually dead over there anyway, so XP.)
  20. Young Sage

    Dead Hour

    Because I said so and I'm the Almighty Author! But really, it's more self-depreciation on my end. Plus, as always, I left clues here and there suggesting a connection to BSC.
  21. Young Sage

    Dead Hour

    I never imagined Shawn and Anthony would go off skipping hand in hand through a field of sunflowers after Chapter 52. I'm surprised they lasted as long as they did. Even after almost 20 years of being together, I don't know if they'll remain together. But it's nice to think that two people as opposite as Shawn and Anthony can make a relationship work for so long.
  22. Death of a Pretty Cool Dude ‘Shawn Christopher Adams is dead.’ This thought kept racing through Anthony’s mind over and over in a torturous, continuous loop, not once letting up for a moment so that his mind could process the situation. The drive to St. Martin’s was as dangerous as if he had been driving with his ass, blindfolded. 'One Hour Earlier…' Anthony was working as usual. He was busily typing up something…in an email…to some chick in Cancun. How he wished to be there, if not with
  23. Young Sage

    Dead Hour

    Dead Hour A gruff man walks into a bar. He is in his early thirties, a stubble that he has long since stopped caring to remove is spread across his face. His hair unkempt, his eyes droop, his demeanor one of every other cubicle dweller on a Wednesday morning. However, today was not Wednesday, but Friday. This man is so defeated, yet still standing, a condition that is not as positive as one would like to think. He trudges over to the counter and plops himself down, slumping himself over, a
  24. Young Sage

    Afterwards

    Two mini-stories dealing with life problems you don't see in a high school setting.
  25. Last year I had cable. This year I don't. D: I DON'T WANNA WAIT UNTIL THE DVD COMES OUT!
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