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  1. PrivateTim

    Chapter 78

    Damn I miss Dom.
  2. PrivateTim

    Chapter 77

    It's funny, I so do not remember this conflict and meeting at all. I remember Nana and Noah and Alistair (upcumming), Ryan, the float trip, Jason and Carl, but this stuff with the doctor I don't remember at all. What a weenie JJ is. Why hasn't Darius throttled him long before this? I mean Will is irritating, JJ is a whole other level.
  3. PrivateTim

    Chapter 76

    Will doesn't understand it is flashy. He hasn't been around many lower middle class kids in his life. Not every kid at Malibu Middle School or Webster Elementary School was wealthy, but there are very few lower middle class types. Noah is far from a player. He is a normal kid. Something so foreign in the CAP Universe it confuses people 😆 A player wouldn't leave a party early. I predict he doesn't. In fact, I'll predict he graduates early 😲🤔
  4. PrivateTim

    Chapter 75

    Maturity? He still looks to me like a petulant, indulged, self-absorbed twit to me. If he doesn't get exactly what he wants he lashes out at people. Look at how he treated Ryan? A mature person wouldn't play the passive aggressive game like he did with Ryan. He would have called him, told him he was moving, tell him he missed him blah blah blah Thanks. Some people find Will to be obnoxious. I think that's part of being a teenager. Hell, I hope Mark gives him some character. I didn't bitch when Will went to a high school party for Menlo and drank, that is quasi-acceptable. Going to college parties and fucking college men when you are a first semester freshman in high school isn't mature. Neither is fucking with a 20 year old when you are 14 and not telling the other person you are 14. It is selfish and self-indulgent and dangerous for the partner. I think that this chapter shows how much Will has matured. Can you imagine if this would have happened to him before he went to Paris? Remember how he was with John? He was sad, but not devastated. See above. Give me examples of Will being mature, not a selfish, petulant ass wipe. I wanna be independent waaaaaah..... Grampa, send a plane to get me. I think Tony was a douche anyway a Will too hung up on him. Sez who? More "you can't be bi" bullshit. "if you have sex with a guy, that means you are gay" horseshit. "if you have sex with a guy and then a girl, you are confused" buffaloshit. "Will is really really mature" giraffeshit.
  5. PrivateTim

    Chapter 74

    “Hey there. I was wondering if you’d fly me up there this weekend.” I asked. No bitch, instead of costing your grandfather $40,000-$60,000 to fly you up to Palo Alto go to BUR and get a Southwest Airlines seat seat to SJC for $39 and see what life is life for the Noahs of the world.
  6. PrivateTim

    Chapter 72

    No one should be fooled, Lizzie is no one's fool. She is a hydra; every evil head that is chopped off, two more grow in. Wade will not pull the wool over her eyes again and she will start analyzing things better in the future. She has learned to not underestimate Wade.
  7. PrivateTim

    Chapter 71

    My gawd I was hilarious 11 years ago 😄🤣 The beauty of rereading a story is I can start Chapter 72 in ten, nine, eight.....
  8. PrivateTim

    Chapter 70

    Actually it is super easy. If you can keep it in CA courts, and I don't recall where this winds up being adjudicated, it, you'll have some of the top experts in the nation in the Bay Area between Stanford UC San Francisco. Momma Danfield may have the hacks she paid to keep Nana drugged up, but it will cost her a lot more to pay a respected expert to lie for her, if she can find one.
  9. PrivateTim

    Chapter 69

    In the same way a quiver of King cobras are.....
  10. PrivateTim

    Chapter 68

    OMG, I'd completely forgotten about "Nana". PS This was Belichik's first year at NE and Tom Brady was a rookie. If Pete Carroll had survived until Brady arrived, would he be the "genius" that Belichik is supposed to be.
  11. PrivateTim

    Chapter 67

    I believe you mean Beatrice “Bitty” Schluter.
  12. PrivateTim

    Chapter 67

    Much like the April 1st chapter of some long lost CAP book, I can see Robbie arguing with Mark. "Why do you have to make me such a douchebag," Robbie whined, "and I'm not whining! Erase that!" "Shut up or I'll add 15 pounds to you and make you even fatter," Arbour growled. "I'm not fat! I'm just a little fluffy! I am tried of looking so stupid, I went to Yale for gawdsake," Robbie grew louder. A withering look from Arbour told Robbie no shouting in the story pages. "Your time will come, in less than a year you'll be a hero in this family." Robbie failed to notice the devious glint in his Maker's eye.
  13. PrivateTim

    Chapter 66

    Stop me if I am wrong, but aren't Ella and Darius an official couple? If she wants to find her way, so be it, but yes, she deserves to be judged if she is coming on to someone at a party in front of her boyfriend. Is everyone from Claremont fucked up? (Ella, Gathan, Zach, Robbie, Kristen, et al) I have to agree with you on Will's fashion sense, but most of us have clothes that we wear for different occasions. I can see Will having a preppy outfit or two. Mr. Don't tell me what to let's people tell him what to do? Because of my early childhood on Oahu and having lived at the beach my whole life (excluding college) I am a beach wear, Aloha shirt guy on my own time, I used to go to LA parties in my Aloha shirt (pullover Reyn's Spooner only) and khaki slacks. If the party was dressier, I wore a blue sport coat over my Reyn Spooner. One big Hollywood Christmas party I wore the gay uniform, black turtleneck sweater under a blue camel hair coat and gray slacks. I looked like half the douches at the party and a bunch of my friends told me it was my best outfit ever. That alone convinced me to never not be true to myself in casual dress.
  14. PrivateTim

    Chapter 65

    Uh..... it's a Mark Arbour story, just talking about Jeanine coming created a hotbed of drama and heavy emotions, which is what Jeanine's coming is for, to create a hotbed of drama and heavy emotions so we can bitch about it being a hotbed of drama and heavy emotions.
  15. PrivateTim

    Chapter 64

    “Well, that’s not my prime objective,” I told him, and I wasn’t real nice about it. “I guess we’ll have to see how it goes.” (petulant) “I think it will be just fine,” he said, but his words no longer had meaning to me. (self indulgent/self pitying) If he would have consulted with all of us, or told me about his rationale, this would have been so much easier. (self important) All of Will's worst personality traits came out in this chapter and showed why he was not deserving of emancipation. Why? Where was Will's compromise?
  16. PrivateTim

    Chapter 63

    It is so funny, I quoted you so I could say you forgot "manipulative", and that was the exact thing I said 11 years ago. Will is a very manipulative person and it has been especially bad these last few chapters. No, Will's goading of Darius, the lip biting, etc went well beyond sibling snipping. You thought Will's lip biting routine was mature? I pretended to be all upset about that, even biting my lower lip, and that got him really nasty looks from not just Grandmaman, but Ella and Aunt Claire. I pretended to shake it off, when inside I was laughing my ass off. Followed by: “Thanks,” I said, hitting him with my serious smile, the one I usually reserved for guys I was trying to fuck. It was pretty flattering to see him almost recoil when it impacted him. How do people not see through this? How has he not been punched in the face more?
  17. PrivateTim

    Chapter 62

    That might happen in real life, but not when the Creator Omnipotent doesn't want it to happen. Will has never experienced any consequences for his misbehaviors. Judge: Now young man, tell me again how your mother physically abused you in Norway? Will: She squeezed my wrist like super hard, I mean super super hard and her nails scratched me. Judge: Umm, super hard, got it. And then something about pictures? Will: Like yeah, this super hot guy was sucking my dick and.... Judge: I am sorry, you are 14 and you were having sex? Was this the only time in Norway? Will: Well no, there was the ice dancer, I fucked him, then the tech guy, he was like 26, my grandfather's assistant, the Swedish skater, my brother's roommate, but we just kissed, and.... Judge: And you were in Norway for a month? Will: Oh no, this was three days... but I am very bashful about my body, that guy took pictures of me! I mean when I was naked and jacking off in the gay club in Rome when I was 13, there was no one taking pictures! That would have been creepy and made me feel violated.....
  18. PrivateTim

    Chapter 60

    On a side note, it is a poor decision to leave Harvard-Westlake to go to the Menlo School. H-W is one of the top schools in the country, and by top schools, I mean top 5. Menlo is way down the list. Currently Niche has H-W at #2 behind Phillips Andover, while Menlo is down at #87. I also think leaving behind his friends and life on the beach is a huge mistake. Nothing beats waking up at 6AM, see the waves pumping and know you can get in 90 minutes before school and you can dash home at last bell for more.
  19. PrivateTim

    Chapter 60

    I think, "you are always welcome at Escorial" was intended as way to stop Will from making another bad, immature decision like he did TWENTY-SIX DAYS AGO when he went off the deep end and made some poor decisions that put him in danger. I am sure they are wondering if they are ready for Hurricane Will. The doctor agreed it would be best to terminate Jeanine's parental rights. He thought emancipation was a bad idea. I think the subdued reaction is because they are not sure it is a good idea. Yes, they'd rather have Will at Escorial than on the streets, but I think they also feel that Will primarily belongs in Malibu and working out his issues with his father, learning to grow up, not being a petulant spoiled brat. No he isn't. He is not in a desperate, dangerous, intolerable situation. He is a newly minted 14 year old who doesn't like being told what to do. He has exhibited any number of poor decisions. Emancipation is not in his best interest. Inviting in federal law enforcement to deal with Michael would not have been the best decision. Who knows what Michael might know about family skeletons. They were right to just bury the issue. They should have explained to Will why better, but hardly a justification for emancipation.
  20. PrivateTim

    Chapter 57

    Palo Alto's runway is under 2,500 feet. Unless Wade was going to use a Piper Cub or Palo Alto installed a catapult, 2,500 feet is about half of what a jet needs for takeoff 😁
  21. PrivateTim

    Chapter 58

    This was 2000 so maybe premature on every teen in America taking nude pics of themselves to send to whomever, but so many don't seem to care about nude pics and explicit vids getting out. It doesn't, it won't. He'll get emancipated, but it won't make him a better, more outward focused person. Even in the circle, when two people pair off they blow off all their friends.... and then the break-up comes and they expect their friends, the ones they've been blowing off, to be there for them. This is exactly how I feel. The Brad of the last few chapters is vastly different from the Brad of the chapters where Will ran away and the reconciliation chapters that followed. I get not wanting Jeanine to deal with federal charges of child porn, but all the more reason to disappear Michael. But, I also get that Mark knew where he wanted to take this story by this time and he needed to write Brad in such a way to get the story to that point. I agree with everything I said in this post 11 years ago. The one modification I might make is that he does not get much of a say in how his life is run. The thing that is hard is to reconcile how I think Brad would really be acting now versus how Mark has him acting. I think Brad would be listening more and explaining more to Will at this point. I also think Brad would have had Jeanine so full of thorazine that she would have been incapable of causing problems. Brad obviously love Will much more then he does Jeanine, I think it would be a no brainer that he'd side with Will and sideline Jeanine.
  22. PrivateTim

    Chapter 57

    Two weird side thoughts: I’d taken JP’s stallion, because he didn’t get as much exercise, and because I wanted a challenge. He could be difficult to handle, so most people opted to ride the mare instead That makes it sound as if Escorial only has two horses, surely they'd have many more, maybe a dozen. I was flying on a commercial airline, in first class, but it was still a commercial airline. I had to drive all the way to San Jose Wouldn't he have to drive to San Jose anyway? In 2000 I am pretty sure SJC was the only option for private jets close to Palo Alto.
  23. PrivateTim

    Chapter 43

    If you've never had a Matt or Brian in your life, it is hard for someone who has to convey what those emotions do to you.
  24. PrivateTim

    Chapter 55

    I think I've decided that "working" is Brad's stress behavior. Yes he has lots of work to do, but he uses his work to get away from things he'd rather not deal with.
  25. PrivateTim

    Chapter 54

    I feel the bolded point even more strongly the second time through. I think Brad would still be traumatized from Will's running away and hired extra security, if even only to watch from afar. He can certainly get better, more discrete help than the guys Will ditched in Paris and I don't think he would have sat by while Jeanine hurt Will. I think with his own ongoing therapy he be more attuned to what was going on in Will's mind. Wah wah wah
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