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Aaronn’s vision had came to pass. His vision stood corrected. Markus’ new monstrous form was breathing, grinding guttural breaths. This monster was the outcome of James, Chance, and my power combined. We were aiming to destroy Markus, and he actually turned into this thing. Our powers brought a new outcome that I didn’t think would ever be possible in life. The three powers of ours that raised nothing human but something beastly from the dead, was to blame. I was too scared to think. I d
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My mom crossed my mind before bed last night. I was worried I wouldn’t live through the mission Shwartz had given us. After the night out at the Italian restaurant with Chance, Aaronn, and James. I was starting to get home sick. Not totally home sick because I still didn’t want to have anything to do with my dad. This had more to do with missing my mom. It amazes me, what people do when they are terrified. I was in that terrified position now. And I wanted my mom. I wanted to say something t
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When the fight between Mason and I was over, I eventually had to free him from the Black mirror enchantment. It wasn’t my plan. I wanted to kill him because he was trying to kill me during the fight. The announcer and the other teachers requested for me to let him free from the dark glass encasing that held him prisoner. I let him free, even though I didn’t want to. Ashlynn’s bleach blond hair was bouncing in his face when I walked to him. He kept jumping around me in tiny circles, aski
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Weeks elapsed, and I wasn’t the new kid at the academy anymore. Especially, after the party we snuck out to weeks ago. Aaronn said: “Keep in touch.” The night at the party. But we haven’t been keeping in touch. We haven’t spoken two words to each other since then. When I saw his white hair treading the halls of Celestial, we didn’t exchange glances or any type of communication. Maybe it was just a one night thing. Maybe he was too drunk that night to remember how he acted. Whatever happe
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Chapter 4 White and Violets
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Every night, Chance would sneak into my room, to talk. Everytime he came, he would sit on my bed with his legs crossed. Each visit he told me more about his life. More about who he was as a person. He had a hard life before he transferred to Celestial Academy. I don’t know why he felt like he could trust me with this information. Maybe it was his way of getting to know someone. Maybe it was his way of trying to get me to talk about my powers. Some nerve this guy had. I think he knew
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Ashlynn and Talan shared the same class as me. Which made my first time in class a lot easier. The only thing I have an issue with is: having to stay in one classroom all day. Listening to one teacher, and looking at the same students. It would be hard getting used to sitting in one classroom again. I haven’t did this, since I was in fourth grade. Something did register the moment I came to class. Celestial was a sea of guys. I remember Talan telling me it was an ‘all guys’ school, but I thi
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I was in a whirlpool of spinning stars. All around the tunnel was glimmering bodies of twinkling illuminations. As I was being sucked through the winding tunnel, I noticed my lungs were like balloons of air. It was like my lungs were inhaling bursts of air but weren’t letting it out. It was hard for me to breathe. I was on the verge of panic when my nostrils refused to let any air out. I was about to open my mouth to scream, but before I could gusts of wind seeped into my throat to block air
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Some people may believe being a sorcerer is about writing any type of symbol, and combining it with random gestures while blurting out any kind of enchantment. Those who believe that, are very wrong! Every sorcerer young and old knows: if one symbol is missing a stray line or if one letter is not pronounced correctly, your powers will back fire on you. Something that has never happens to me, because I have always taken extra precaution while doing my sorcery. I learned quickly as I grew in
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Through his life, a young teen boy has had to hide his great ability. Struggling to develope his ability and control it, he has faced a struggle in his home. Throughout many challenges that come forth, the young boy will have to become stronger... not only in power, but in his heart.
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i know. when i wrote it, i couldnt believe it was ending. seeing Braylon finally get what he wanted but in an unexpected way was facinating to write. lol i'm thankful for the feedback it was much needed and appreciated. it makes me feel amazing that you got invovled with the characters. Braylon is quite dramatic. he takes verything to a high level. lol his aim was to stike hard so that the other three guys wouldnt try to stike back harder. i have a bonus chapter i might post, but it is in the group i created.
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that makes me smile. i'm so prooud that you all really liked the story. i will be posting my other stories really soon, since you liked this one.
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Korbyn’s plan ‘Swarm and Spread’ was fantastic. It was a simple but yet effective plan which I don’t think Keylan could recover from. It was funny watching Korbyn go all over the school putting printed out copies of papers about Keylan in every locker he came in contact with. The paper said: If you have had any type of sexual intercourse, with Keylan Sanchez, you should be tested. Please get tested at the nearest clinic. Especially if you are experiencing any unnatural signs of dizziness, nause
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Korbyn was proving to be a proficient member. Surprisingly, he kept his side of the plan, by bringing me one of the three things I needed from the list. Jade brought three red markers, and I had to bring the most important ingredient to make code red a success. “Let’s go see what happens when the bell rings.” Jade suggested. He seemed more thrilled than anyone else. He wanted David, Keylan and Ryan to go down silent and quickly. “Yes, I want to witness what the three of us did together,” Korby
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i'm really thrilled that you all are getting involved with the story. keep the feedback coming because it keeps me uplifted. Mitch is a hottie. i have a thing for him myself...lol
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I had been calculating and rescheduling everything. It comes down to today! Today, is the day my clique will be resurrected. Jade and I worked hard, to get all of this arranged, and back in order. We both invited all of the clique to the table we regularly sit at. I was calling a meeting to reunite us. I have everything I want to say memorized, so nothing can go wrong. All there is left, is to wait on Jade to walk back in here with them. After the meeting we can settle things, and everything wi
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All week before we entered the school we shared a kiss. It was nothing like the first kiss, but somewhere under the line. We weren't in love or anything. This was more of an admiring thing. Mitch opened up to me more. He told me after the few weeks of being around me. He saw me as someone to be with. His friends had no clue what was happening between us. One day at lunch he almost forgot and wrapped his arm around my waist, in front of them! I playfully smacked his arm away to give him the rem
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Mitch's car was a coat of red. When I got in, I felt comfortable. The Jaguar was just as luxurious on the inside, as it was on the outside. He blasted rap music, at a high echoing volume. I wanted to cover my ears, at the same time, I didn't want to be rude. Somehow, I thought he could read my mind, because he turned the volume down on his music. It was a less disturbing volume, now. It was at a minimum to give me time to think. Mitch was leaning back, steering his car with one hand. He was al
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I slept so well the other night, I almost forgot I was at Jade's. I was surprised when I woke up to his warm body sleeping on top of me! I wanted to stay there under him while he warmed me. As I got up our skins sliding against one another's made it even harder for me to get up, but I managed to make it home. The weekend blew by me. The only thing that was trapped in my head was Jade. He was what mattered all weekend. My brother's band of thugs came over all weekend whooping and hollering. The
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lol i understand what you guys are saying about the corrections that need to be made. i see them as i am reading over the story. the only reason i havent altered it, is because this was the very first story i have ever written. i was just figuring out my style of writing when i wrote this story, and i was also trying to figure out my writers voice. as i amposting these old chapters i am leaving them as i wrote them few years ago, so that when i start posting newer stories you all can see how much i have developed and grown as a writer... it is also a reminder for me as i read how much i have evolved. i do appreciate you giving the story a shot. beyond the errors i'm happy that you are enjoying it. sit tight because it is about to get better.
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thank you so much. it does get better. this was the first story I ever wrote as a writer, and I thought I would share it on here with everyone. I kept it as it was written so that everyone can see how much I hav grown as a writer when I start posting new stories.
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The week after the party went by fast. David and Kimmie were seen everywhere. They had made things between them official. The sight of them in the halls was the ugliest thing ever! Jade passed the juicy gossip to me every time somebody made a move. The gossip for this week was good. It gave me something else to think about besides what Keylan said Saturday. Ryan was absorbed in talking with Keylan and Korbyn. Sometimes they seem like they were their own clique. Korbyn ignored me. He still woul
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Chapter 4 Party Conflict Cont.
flawlesss commented on flawlesss's story chapter in Chapter 4 Party Conflict Cont.
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I was laying back just taking in the presence of the most tremendous guys ever. I spend the majority of my days with these guys. They have an important place in my heart. It feels like they have become another part of me. I can’t see myself without them. I don't even know how I would cope with this reality if one of them was missing. My friends cause a flood of the best emotions known to man. I can’t help, but feel...how should I put it, Empty inside. I still have a great time with them, but it
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There isn't a better way to dress for a party. Navy blue American Eagle shirt with shredded pants. It was a hott look for me. I was the first, out of my clique to arrive. David's house was an incredible piece of work, but I can't compare it to Ryan's mansion. I was hearing music, TV, laughing, and loud talking. They sound like they are having a blast. I didn't want to enter yet. I was waiting for my clique to come, first. Come on you guys...I've been waiting in this frosty air for a long time
