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  1. Wilhelm
    Nice story--just curious how the happy fairy tale will develop. There seems to be missing between these sentences, though: (1)"Sure," Aidan smiled brightly. He stared at Luis one more time before he finally let go of his hand and followed his father, the king. Luis didn't follow him but from that wonderful smile he could tell that he had wanted to. (2)"Err...yeah," Luis confessed. "I haven't seen him for quite some time and..."
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