Marzipan
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Hello Star and Orchid! I think this story has a very touching start that makes me wanna continue reading soon! I can't even imagine how hard it was for Ricky to leave his little brother to the hands of the man he despices. The final embrace scene got me sighing. I'm looking forward on what is going to be revealed of Ricky's and Randy's past as well as what is going to happen to them from this point on.
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Oooohhhh... Please don't stop updating! I'm gonna be a good gal and go and read and review it tonight! You better not stop posting it !!!!!!!!!!! Also to Neph: Don't you dare to pull of your stories. I haven't gotten to all of them. And I have not gotten such an idea, that they're no good since the lack of reviews. I totally agree with you on the importance of the feedback. I made a pact with myself since I started posting my own stories, that I'll leave a review of everything I read, mybe not to every chapter, but at least some thoughts the story ewoked in me. I have been doing that with great enjoyment.
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Pole dancing fun, got lots of bruises.
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That can be annoying, I forget too, but then again, if I remember it later I will go and rate!
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Just as I say in my signature below. Give feedback, leave reviews! A word or two to let the author now how you felt about the story after reading it!
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We had the Rybak's 'Fairytale' in one of our fit ball classes for months and it is a good and innovative song with the violins and a really cute singer. We had Eurovisions as a theme then and it was just horrible to me! This season the theme in our class is musicals and I think it is gonna be even worse to my sanity, the songs are really difficult to learn. At least the Eurovision songs were easy!
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- Viv's From Behind those Eyes - Comicality has a lot of great stories, and they are long, try A Class by Himself - Jack Frost's Moving on (I'm reading it now and loving it!) - Cia's Escaping the pain ... The list goes on and on, I have tons of recommendations, but I'd start with those ^^
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Hahhahhaa... Like Ben's mum cant guess!!!!!! And wwho was in the toilet witnessing boys!?! I would have thought that Steph would have been a bit more reseved when it came to his first sexual experience, but then again teenage hormones! You make me wanna take some French classes!
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Hard Rock Hallelujah Eurovision winner year 2006. Lily! I think we have found one thing tho seperate us! I really don't like Eurovision songs! Only decent was the only Finnish winner Lordi with that anarchist song. When Lordi won I was partying at my friends marriage and we went to skinny dipping into ice cold river after group sauna. It was fun!
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The pace of this story moved to a bit faster lane. I don't mind at all though. I think Kris is really interesting, the third wheel of this stort that can alter the whole string of events. You place the suspicions on him gently but sternly. How can he already suspect something...
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What a surprise move from Steph at the end! Didn't see that one coming, I was so sure you were gonna stall his secret much longer. I think the chemistry is very real and the cute emo-pants, hehe... I love the French in your story! I just might learn a word or two here! **crisse**
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dying inside.
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thesis
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So, Ben has a history of heartbreak. I'm looking forward on learning more about him. I like how Steph protects Ben but still fights with his own personal issues. I love the French speaking in this too! This is just precious to read before going to bed, I don't wanna leave this out of my hands now!!!
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Keeps getting more and more interesting! Steph is such an awesome character with such a peculiar personality and Ben is just *sigh*. I love how you bring your background as a Canadian to this story! Adds real depth! Icehockey is a popular sports in Finland too, and I bet you have heard of my country man, Saku Koivu
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Well I might not be much of a singer, but yoy boy are an amzing author! JES! I'm really excited about this story, can't wait to move to the next chapter. Every character introduced seemed so real from the buss driwer Fran to the lead. The very start was a total hook in itself. I felt invested immediately and every little deatail you have carefully planted into the story fits and pleases me!
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[KingdombytheSea] Social Skills
Marzipan replied to Sara Alva's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Slump? Nooooo slumps! :wacko: :wacko: :wacko: -
Lmao Andy, you look red hot.
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I read this story a while back and It is still in my top three reads in GA. I love this story, it made me believe that good things don't need magic to happen.
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Nice ball And you are just too cute.
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I look down, and breakdown That was my favourite part of the poem. Also asking if you see me, the true me whe I'm not sure if I know who I am, was interesting. Ohhhhh... poem reviewing is hard, I only can say what I feel after the read and it can be so different than you had in heasrt when writing it. That makes poetry so much more intriguing.
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I like anything that evokes feelings in me. This poem was dark and filled me with sadness, like I'm sure it was supposed to. Eternity is the only lover that won't let us down. So, no need to rush the fate, right? I can't leave a smiling face in this review, but instead I offer a hug.
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Chapter 8 is out. I also did some editing to the previous chapters. All comments are welcome
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Nemesis
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[KingdombytheSea] Social Skills
Marzipan replied to Sara Alva's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Connor goes to the dance and that is where things start to roll down hill first, then.... Right? I really can see Jarod stepping up for his real love at some point, but lets enjoy the agony first! This is going to be a good ride!
