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Who has told you that ? What a strange comment. I hope it wasn't from the author... Then again, the main thing I guess is to give feedback, no matter which way it is given. I'm sure it is appreciated.

Do you just wanna hear what I liked best, or the whole fireworks Catara caused in my mind ? Catara was the one you recommended me instead of Forever Boy, for me being all sensitive and yadayada. Well, I read them both and Catara was actually my first scifi read in about a decade . It made me read, then stop, then read it again and stop all the time. It totally messed up my mind - in the best possible way. I love that I was forced to slow down and taste every single happening, curve of the story and the language was all foreign to me. I really really love the story. Catara has a lovestory in it and I'm not gonna say more, but it has a significant twist in it and I was just snickering after realizing I wasn't seeing typos before. Lugh, if you need to know more about that I'll be happy to pinpoint the exact points in text that had me wondering. But I'm thinking you placed them there deliberately. I loved the surprise element the most, but the unique world you created and I just got a small glimbse of makes me wanna learn more of it. And you said so, there is so much more. Yup, it was so good, I have read more and more of your stories and even got sucked into poems too! So there. I can be more specific too Just ask.

I had this advertisement in Jwolf's The List thread as well... so I think I need a treat

WOW! Another interesting setup for later! So, Lee and Liam... The declaration Lee made about bisexuality seemed very personal to him. I'm guessing there is more to come about them with this storyline. I need more hours to read on... Ok, I'll steal part of my bedtime and read yet another chappy. Darling, this is so good!

Hah! I always shout for the stories I love! Btw, Andy, go and read Lugh's Catara as well, if you haven't done that already. I NEED for him to continue the story. **pouts** (Sorry J for advertising in your thread )

Ok, here is the deal. I wanna read more about Math's adventures and Lugh is refusing to post more of them before peeps start reading Catara more. This is making me annoyed. So, read it already! Now! Tonight!

Sorry for the double post, yes 2 reviews for the prize of one , but how on earth is this comedy :-o

I'd say intrigued... What were the stright rules with this bio poem? You sound so awesome

I'm doing this all backwards. I just read the postcript, not the story and I just wanna say that this is most likely to be the only story I won't be reviewing. Not because I won't be liking it - something says I'm gonna love it and cherish it - but because of respect to your and Sam's life. As this is a true story will read it with love and care. I wish the best for you. This is a wonderful way to keep Sam's memory alive.

Jwolf's The List offers quite a different perspective in search of love! Try it and enjoy the ride There is a lot of hot sex in the story, but that the way J balances with true emotions and the sexual exploration is really different! Every chapter offers a small story but also builds up a bigger picture of the lead characters life.

lmao, I can see that happening! Hey, can I really write this fan fic? I wanna do it! First I need to read the stories though So it'll be out like at the end of the year ... :music:

I feel that way too. Buuuuuuuut there is more to come with Tim. So I hope you read on and try to keep an open mind. I did my very best to make Tim a really predator-like villain. I would love to hear more thoughts about him.

Just out of curiosity... How many stories do you work on? Can you be in the process of writing several stories, or do you need a closure to the one in hand before moving on? Do you have many stories that you betaread/edit? How does that effect on your own writing? What do you feel you are getting out of it? Me... I write one story as a major project that I wanna finish first. But I also write 2 other big projects in the side, and those are in different stages of coming to words. To keep my mind busy and ideas coming I have started to write shorties and poems as well. I have yet avoided to become bored with my stories, is that even possible? I beta read a few stories, I feel I learn from the processes of other authors so much! Seems like every single author has a totally different way of forming the story! And that is just amazing! It is such an inspiration to me to read and work with the authors. I don't edit other authors since my grammar is not that good. My strenght is helping with the plot, character dilemmas and giving the author motivation and support! My biggest motivation is giving and getting support and producing a healthy, non-competitive ground to enjoy and hopefully create amazing stories!

Neph! Write a short story, where you throw these amazing characters in together, with a dilemma to solve and something to really bring out their ways of coping with it and each other! It could be placed in a dream of yours, if you don't wanna mix the whole univese of stories permanently. The story would be titled: Nephylim's dream I'd read it If you are not writing it, can I write a fan fic?

What a great start! First love, true love was so beautifully depicted. **Sigh** My heart ached for the misery of being broken apart. And the final drop! WOW! So good.

I hate shopping! **shrivers** But it is fun to read of other peeps' shopping horror aswell :D This reading/hearing minds/feelings is so interesting, how would you be able to hold things out from someone like that?

Chapter ten is out. This is going to be a sad one. Then it gets better!

Darling! I missed you complitely, me IDIOT... Welcome, come and bug me when ever you want! I love Frosty so I'll learn to live with you too (just kidding)

Dear Moniseur Frost, this is a humble request that you will continue posting with the 'Moving on'. Love it love it love it.

I got both my bedtime poems and a story in one package! Thank you. I think this story was really adorable, I loved the way you desriped words forming into place. Plot wise I was so pleased that this went through a full circle, I love happy endings. I need a happy ending, even if it doesn't come without a prize. It had a touch with both reality and a dream in it; the most handsome boy in the school falling just for you and then the father's first reaction with finding out that his son is gay balanced well. One thing I need to ask , and please humor me... what is it with the details about ... size? I did think the se sex scene fit well with the story, but the size of the ... really is not usefull to me. hehe. Just a thought I enjoyed this as a first taste of your stories and I'm definitely gonna read more from you!

I can honestly say, that to me hiv is a disease amongs others, not a stigma. Still it is responssible to be open about it in a relationship. It is not a death sentence, there are no guarantees in life, period. It would just be foolish to turn away if you have something real in your relationship. I read the whole thread and it made me really sad. This reflects gay community in so many ways. There really are countless ways to practise safe sex and loving. My heart goes to the many people carrying hiv and reading this thread too. They have a right to have all aspects of life, love and sex included. They shouldn't have to be hiding and ashamed of themselves. It is just a disease, not the whole person. I would be so hurt if my partner would keep being hiv+ from me. That doesn't show enough respect to me. I would wanna know. If I had hiv, gosh, I would try to live my life as I do now. And pray that the one I love would accept me as I am, with all that I am. Just as I do now.

I have been emotional all day and just getting better, then I read this and now I'm back in tears. I know these stories are important and so many go through these options, some actually step off the cliff too. My heart breaks for anyone that goes through this. I just wanna give them a hug and promise to make it better. You made me feel so many feelings that I personally have pushed under the surface too, today those feelings of rejection were not far and this story really hit the nerve. Thank you for a really important stroy. A lot can be said in a few words.

We'll be here for you

That was just beautiful. I'm crying. I'm so happy for you.

Chapter nine is out.