Marzipan
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Glorious death is not. You captured so well the unavoidable.
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The ending said it: the rest of our lives. That means love.
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You presented a deep cutting moral dilemma with your story. I have never personally thought about other person making me full, or keep me in balance. To me finding balance is something deeply personal and an ongoing process. It is never finished. But you made me think about my perspectives of balance again. I loved the way the voice of the narrator rolled fro the start. It was easy to put myself in his shoes. I also loved that you left the choice he eventually makes open, although I think he stayed with the guy. Well, I think that that statement says more about me, heh-heh... Thank you for a really thoughtful piece of story!
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I really am interested to join you guys if you'll have me . It's only matter of me getting my holidays for that time.
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I like both singles and series and it all depends of the strory told. Sometimes it is just better to leave it be where it ends, no matter how good the story is. And then there are situations, that offer oppenings for the story to expand. I love short stories! The thrill of reading something that is just a glimpse of happeningsor the big picture. and you as a reader have to fill in the blanks, is deeply satisfying.
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That Dustin is a real devil for a innocent lover. The psychology behind Eric is really peculiar. I really want a happy ending to this story.
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Eric seems to be in deep trouble, oh dear. He seems so fragile, doesn't Dustin see that? Curious about the way this story is gonna go. I do see a glimmer of hope though.
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My ipod has been busy with: 1. Queen (fror gym) - Another One Bites the Dust - I want To Break Free - Show Must Go On 2. Bat For Lashes (for reading and writing, especially Daniel) - Daniel - What's a Girl to Do 3. Prodigy (for running) - Breathe - Firestarter - No Good (Start the Dance) 4. HIM (for writing and sketching) - anything from Uneasy listening vol 1&2 Well, there are more favs too...
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ENDORPHIN
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I'm so sorry for your cousin. *hugs* All life is precious, but prolonging life at all costs is not ethical. You have such a stong message here.
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Lol, thaaaanks so much for appreciation! Well, call my English Finglish from now on, k? It's not that bad, when I see those myself, right? Right...
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I started a thread earlier that's titled 'How does a sory come to you?' I was just about to press post, when I noticed in the last possible moment that the title had a typo on it. It said: 'How does a story come on to you?' Now would that have been a totally different discussion...
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What did he regret? Bad sex? Realizing too late he was just paid to be used, not to participate? He surely took the act of prostitution qute lightly, almost like a game, until afterwards. Then it sunk in. Well, these shorties of yours are so cryptic and that makes the marvelous
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I love beautiful covers, but the smell of books does nothing to mee. A drob dead gorgeous cover might distract me for ages. As a kid I used to eat books... Must have tasted good
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Sorry
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Thanks for sharing
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I really much agree with Krista! Let's start a campaing for reviewing! Something to activate those who already read a lot and leave the story without any note. There must be tons of members reading each day and it seems that only the same handful of people are active with giving reviews. I pretty much feel sorry for every single author without geting any reviews, I know how important getting them is. I feel joy to give reviews and show the appreciation to the writer.
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**does the same google search **
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I do appreciate the laughs I earn with my typos, and laugh along since they are many times FUNNY! And I'm not being malicious when asking other peoples typos... You can by all means just put a list of what I have done, since it is a long list! And I don't mind being corrected of the, how else do I learn if I don't see them ? here is one: - Trip over --> tripple
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Lots of questions! First, welcome to GA! This is where you can start: make five posts so that you can kinda activate yourself. Every member has a profile and everyone can choose the way they are active: some are just readers, some use chat and forum discussions as well, some keep blogs, some write stories and/or poetry, some are editors some do all of that. I'm sure that all questions are answered here! https://www.gayauthors.org/help.html Just hang around the site, look for stories and be as active as you want and ask what ever comes to mind! And have fun!
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Textbook excample how to deepen your storytelling description. I kinda liked the second chapter most, the manly grunty sentences fit weel to the were scenery as this later version was almost sophisticated. There was a one very obvious downside; I wanted to read a whole lot more of this werestory. It has quite interesting setting around it, aside your play with the rules. Do you have more were-tales?
