readingismytherapy

I don't comment on many stories and I've never criticized an author for any reason, but then again this is the first story that I've allowed myself to read before all the chapters are finished. This story is great and the character development is awesome, but the overall plot is very slow and the repetitive description of Blake's awkwardness and nerves seems to fluff the story at times. I'm probably just coming off as a jerk, but I love this story and I literally have it bookmarked and I check every night and morning before the next chapter usually comes out and I just wanted to actually review a chapter for once and not just say "omgosh it's amazing"...even though it is.

Blake's character is very refreshing to read because he's not simply another gay character who is insecure, but actually has a mental condition. Your plot in the story is going great. I love the development between Black and Haze, and I can't wait to read the following chapters. I love long stories and this is one of the best I've read.

Please please don't stop writing this story. I have been an avid reader on gayauthors for years and this is my first review/comment on any story. I see that a few of your other longer stories haven't been finished and the last updates were a few months ago. This story is up there with DomLuka and Philips. I hope to read more from you.