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A great story Adam. Thanks for letting me know that they were completed! As I read thru them I remembered the whole story line. A great ending !

Adam, another beautiful story. The prologue and he latest story don't quite meet up. I hope there is more. I can hardly wait!

CJ I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Masterful writing! When i first saw it posted I thought to myself.....do I really want to read it now or save it. But i couldn't resist. Well done dude! I am looking forward to the epilogue - tie up some loose ends and see where their future lays. Thank God for happy endings!

CJ, I'm enjoying reading the discussion here in your forum - not as much as reading the story (epic novel) but still good! Weird stuff does happen in real life. Last week the ground wires at our incoming electrical lines were damaged by the gardener and I woke up one day with voltage spikes in the house. Almost took out my computer, and our furnace, but PG&E was there within the hour and took care of it. So take your time and don't rush it. This is the last chapter - once published, you can't go back!

Bridget is dead. DEAD. Thank you! Now if you can only get our heroes to safety. Thank you CJ for another amazing journey.Your talent and imagination are definitely something to be admired.

OMG, I'm sitting here at 3:24 PDT and our Great Leader posted at 1:54 PM that the story will be appearing within 2 hours. I'm on the edge of my seat hoping 1:54 PM was also PDT!

I have been following your stories for what seems like forever, and always look forward to when a new chapter comes out. I was surprised to log in today and find the last chapter, but knew it had to happen at some point. I can't wait for the next CAP story! You are an excellent writer, and I will always be there!

My thoughts exactly. Holy Shit! No hope. Four brave souls and three beating hearts. It's all been said already. And Bridget is still there. Will that bitch ever be put down! My heroes need to Live!

CJ this is not just a story. Your basis of information about all this just astounds me. The story always interests me and keeps me coming back week after week. Of course my ultimate goal is to see the bad guys loose and the good guys win. But the facts you present along the way make it truly fascinating! Thanks man!

I just knew it. Knew that Bridget would figure they weren't in the Panama canal. And now all this intrigue with the Argentinians. And the Falklands. And the potatoes.... that threw me for a loop. I wonder what he read online that gave him that idea. Should I search potatoes and Argentina? Was it truly to find out if the boat was actually occupied? The mysteries continue. I hope they can get out of there..... the next chapter should be exciting!

CJ, I have been following this story from the beginning, and always look forward to your next post. This one was especially exciting - how you know the details that you write about with the trip through the storm is beyond me. Now, why was the Witch so happy......that is what, of course has me worried.

Yes Indeed CJ. Welcome back! I just happened to log in and see recent updates that you just posted It's Personal. Made my afternoon. Glad they're not headed for Panama now, but I can't put it past the witch to find out...

CJ you are a master of intrigue - I look forward to a new chapter every weekend. And I keep hoping the evil diva will get what's hopefully coming to her!

I can't wait for Moorcroft's story to come out. Bridget needs to know she's about to be ......

Another great chapter! I love reading about Shane and Trevor, and anytime Bridget isn't around is perfect for me. But there's still that tracking device and Gray and Bridget hanging in the background. They have to get theirs at some point - I'm only hoping to see the day she is gone!