Monster33

Best story everrrrr I read and reread and reread again and again. It's a welcome break in my busy new college life. By far the best chapter. I love seeing Haze so care free and letting Blake into his world. Buttttttt that said, I can't wait for the storm

HOLY. SHIT. so that was the hottest, most unsatisfactory, erotic, disappointing, fantastic thing I've ever read. First, all the good stuff because it's one of the most AMAZING piece of erotica I've ever had the honor of reading. All the bad stuff because what made it so good was the emotional journey that got them there. Haze needs to get it in his head that it's not gonna be that easy!! Blake needs to get over Haze's hungry eyes long enough to set that pretty boy straight (in a matter of speaking ) HURRY UP. I can't wait two weeks! It's seriously not fair. At all.

THIS. IS. SO. DIFFICULT. I'm so wound up! Write faster!

Just started reading this today. It's VERY promising. Keeping my eye on this one

I haven't had the time to really stop and comment, but wow! This is fantastic. You can really feel how scared Blake is and how lost Haze is. You're right, a kiss there would have been too much. Also, I think the story has very good pacing, if you look at it from the point of Christmas is around the corner and the drunken party was the night before whispers. I love this story to pieces. Please, keep writing!

Just found this, and it's completely different from anything else I've read. The whole dynamic is so...off beat. Tyler scares the shit out of me. I'm not gonna lie, I'm completely terrified of him. I actually kinda like Wade. Mostly because he pisses Tyler off, and Tyler scares me. Tyler is just so..."do what i say, do it now, and I am a murderer. I probably killed your family. I def killed my dog. PS, i like you, kinda. Lets have sex." He creeps me out Wade, on the other hand, is really just...kinda awesome. He's like "yeah, i like sex. The end." and Tyler is like "-strangle strangle- I DONT LIKE WADE -strangle strangle, sleep-" Anyway, that's just what i think. I'll def be back though to read what happens!

I know what's wrong with Blake!! HIS STORY ISN'T BEING WRITTEN FAST ENOUGH!!! -you should be honored that I'm flipping out. That means I love it and it's amazing and you should continue and you have my emotions in your little, slow typing fingertips. But fair warning, type faster so I don't find you and put YOU in my basement-

This better mean it's not going to take so long to update. Because, honestly, I don't think I can wait so long next time. Perfectly written, of course. Still mad at you.

AS;OLDJ HWOADFVJ!!! That was PERFECTO. 10 days. All I have to do is wait 10 days... you like happy endings. I like happy endings. Nothing is wrong. 10 days 10 days 10 days maybe 11 or 12, but im holding on for 10

I didn't like this chapter. I'm still all for the whole "throwing them in my basement" idea. Lot less angst, lots more fun.

I began a review the night you posted this, but I forget what came up. I think I was hungry. I didn't lie when I said I check this basically everyday (I have it bookmarked!) Can I tell you how pumped I was that you posted in 9 days instead of 10+? A surprise, indeed!! I say that Blake and Haze need to come out of that closet for a second and see the sunshine! I'm kinda ill...okay, I'm very ill, so i may not make much sense. But I love this chapter! It made me happy!

I feel so bad for both of them :[ Obviously, they just need each other and to live happily ever after in my basement. The end

I've been keeping up with this story since around chapter 9, but this is the first time i've ever felt the NEED to comment! This story is so well organized and well thought out. The writing style is amazing, and while I've mostly stopped coming on this site, I still check this board EVERY. DAY. I can clearly understand everything that's going on, even though I've never been diving or on an ATV and I've never been outside of the USA. I can still picture everything. The characters are very believable and well put together. No one-dimension BS. The plot is moving fast enough to be thrilling and slow enough where you don't feel rushed. The only thing I would change, personally, are the names. You must understand, though. Whenever I write, it takes me the entire story to come up with names. I carry a baby name book with me to scan through when I get bored. Haze and Blake are not names you hear normally, so while one of the characters could be named Haze or Blake, the probability of both of them having such unusual names is unlikely. But, LORD, I am just swept away with this piece. The ending completely SHOCKED me, but it made perfect sense. It's like the puzzle pieces came together. Haze's strange on-off switch, the weirdness between him and Kate, why he's so in check with himself... Also, why Blake kept mentioning "Angry Haze is better than blank Haze" or something like that. It's just so well written and planned out. Kudos to you for writing this.